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whoa whoa whoa. what? that was just messed up. i find it relatively hard to believe (well, SORTA) that ginny would do something like that. that's slightly, o, i dunno, creepy, obsessive, way beyond stalkerish? uh, yeah. i liked it, though |
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Very chilling. I like the idea and I like how you handled it. The last line I think is my favourite because it can be sweet, sick and sad all at once. I don't think I've ever read a story with Ginny being insane before.
It's interesting to see things from Draco's point of view: "Her belief that her group of fanatics were on a better moral plane than his group of determined wizards.."
I find it interesting how you often begin your stories with a single short sentence. I find that it captures the attention and sets the mood.
Your stories are refreshing, and though some of the ideas aren't original (then again, I dont' think anythig is really original now) there's still that bit of uniqueness that you manage to add in there.
This isn't romantic, this isn't sweet, but it still has a hell of a lot of passion in it, though twisted it may be. I like it. |
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Sage ValeSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/12/05
this story is only one of two horror D/G stories here, and it frightened the crap out of me the first time i read it. I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!
-- Sage |
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I could honestly say that I have never read a fic like this. It was very... original! Great job on it though! Great work!
(Ginny's Mental!!) |
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Rea YumeSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/06/04
Never have I read a dark fic in which Draco is held captive by Ginny. Very original, it's got all the little wheels in my head spinning =P
Wonder why she can use an unforgivable without being caught?
i feel sorry for Ginny that she turned out this way, it kind of has me thinking that maybe she's lost everyone else, which is why she's holding on so protectively to Draco.
anyway, terribly interesting, i enjoyed it lots. keep up the good writing,
Rea |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/06/04
Wow! Ginny is very....hmm...twisted. And I must say I enjoyed it. Looks like the war or perhaps her own dark past warped her mind.
Poor Draco. I can't believe he didn't go crazy being locked in a dark room for 4 months and being tortured by a cruel Ginny.
Now he is destined to be under Imperio for life.
Burgosdamasco |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/06/04
Wow! Ginny is very....hmm...twisted. And I must say I enjoyed it. Looks like the war or perhaps her own dark past warped her mind.
Poor Draco. I can't believe he didn't go crazy being locked in a dark room for 4 months and being tortured by a cruel Ginny.
Now he is destined to be under Imperio for life. |
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LauraUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/06/04
Wow. That was... creepy. But in a good way.  It was very, very twisted and original. It was unlike anything I've ever read before. Great job! |
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