great story! ur a good writer! keep going! when is it gonna be done?

I'm hopping that you'll continue this fanfic, and update real soon!!!

good stuff! ur a great writer ! U have a creative mind!! the story is really good!! great job

wow i love this............. I'm a prongs lover, and I c that prongs has been flirting with someone else. As long as he get's back to my wife, i'lll be happy

I fully love it. CAn't wait for another chapter and find out what Lily has been up to.

Nice and origninal! I like it alot! You have potential.

Oh so sad!!
I love it though!!
I cannot wait until this is updated!
Hopefully soon!

You have to write more! they have to meet again because its way to sad! I cant stand that james has another girlfriend so make them meet again.!!!!

OMG........that was soooooooooooooooooooooo sad Lily broke james's heart. You have a very good story, but goodness was that sad. Will it become more or less morose? I just hope the future chapter won't make me cry. Anyway, great story with a powerful emmotional scene

Aw.... this is like the 2nd time in almost 20 mintues that I've begun to cry over a fic. That was... I can't describe it. Lily had better get her sorry butt back to James. No ifs, ands or buts aboiut it. Poor James.
This was so good. I love it. Please keep up the good work and I really hope to see more of this fic soon. Please post more of this fic soon. I can't wait for the coming chapters. More soon please?