I loved your story it's great.Keep writing don't worry what other people say. Can't wait to read more. You're going on my favorite stories and favorite authors list.(consider that an honor i barely give people enough credit on there writing) Keep writing love it!!!!!!!!!!

Incredible. I love how you portray Lily... Half the fanfic writers out there act like she's some ditzy idiot, but I always thought she'd be more the philosophical type...

Where are the updates? I really love this story. Please keep it coming!

this is one of the best lily james fics ive ever read this is amazing, keep it coming

I really like this story. It's great how you describe everything so well. The sunset on the lake was amazing. And I really liked the written word discussion. It made me think. Really great chapter.

I hope Lily and James get closer soon, but good story

great chap! i liked the james & lily interaction! you did a good job with making it vague but not to vague. keep writing and update soon!

Ohhh I like it! I really like the look and attitude you've given each character, James's mood swings, Lily's nightmares and her strange obsession with the sea, Sirius being all dark and mysterious-like...it's teriffic! And those snakes are way creepy, man. Keep it up!

AT LAST!!!!! I friggin love this story and I'm SO happy you finally updated! The entire scene with James and Lily under the peach tree was magnificently done. This is one of the more adult-like Lily and James stories I've read: the language is very delicate and yet very dark, and I enjoy that. You're doing splendid work and I can't wait to read more of it.

Very interesting plotline. The author manages to capture the fear and tension that must have existed when Voldemort first rose, and James and Lily's relationship gains a new depth in light of the events they have to face.

An interesting beginning. I must admit that this is the first action/adventure story I've read about Lily and James, however I find your story to be intriguing and very plausible.

Your characters behave as I imagined they would at this age. Very realistic and true to the few JKR-details we have.

Looking forward to further installments.

P.S. I would ove to know more about Snape's background and his family's relation to Voldemort and the Death Eaters. Perhaps this will play into the story later?

Goodness, I am completely in love with this story. THere is so much depth here, and on a side note, your poetry is GORGOUES!! Thank you for not having a Lily/James bitch match the first part of the story. It's nice to sede them in something other than blind hatred before getting together.

...wow...
This is truly inspiring. One of the best fics I've read in a looooooooooooong time. And believe me, I read many a fics daily. You have such a way with words. Its nearly unexplanable. I must admit, I'm a bit jealous. But also awed. Yeah.
~moi et toi ensemble

PS- As you can see, I'm not as good at writing as you, but hey. I tried.

Wow... I really liked this. Something different. And the poems. Wow... Please keep it up. Post more soon!

Wow that is a good story i hope you write more soon