This was a really good start and i know it said you would continue this so im not going to beg you to im going to beg you to continue soon please!!!

I like it, sorta' has a broody, darker mood to it. Please update soon, I'm anxious to know what happens!

Pretty good, let me read the other chapters (I usually wait until the end of the story to make a review)!

I like it so far. We'll see where it goes from here.

I really like the premise of this story. I look forward to see what you do with this. It has a good start...just please, don't abandon it!

Very good. Sad, too. Will Harry live? I hope so. Anyway, keep up the great work and write more!

A very powerful beginning to your story. I enjoyed it and I look forward to the next chapter.

Good start. It certainly is a bleak scene, but very well written. You have made it easy to feel Harry's inner turmoil. I will be looking for the next chapter.

Yep I am confused I hope you can clear this up nest chapter.

I enjoy these sorts of fanfiction; keep up the GREAT work and GO HARRY YOU SURE AS HELL AIN'T NORMAL!!! but thats a good thing!!!