hey, I really loved this story!  It was short but sooo sweet, and it just seemed utterly perfect. Bravo |
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I was just browsing around hoping to find something intresting and what do i find? The greatest story ever! This was so unbelivably realistic, Harry's tone and Hermione's actions all co-exist with what JKR had planned. Even though it isn't exactly what everyone believes will happen.. I still think that Harry and Hermione will always conquer what Ron has over Hermione. I loved this story to pieces and I'm excited to read you next stories! |
Author Feedback: Glad you enjoyed it!
JKR may have made it clear that H/Hr is not in the cards for her series, but that certainly doesn't mean the authors can't take her characters and run wild with them.
Thanks for reading and reviewing! : ) |
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 Aww--this was a fabulous little fluff bunny. I quite enjoyed it, thanks.
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Author Feedback: Uhm, oops. I had no idea that I had reviews on this that I never responded to. : )
Thanks for reading and reviewing! My, I really need to keep up with this thing better. |
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You know, when Harry said he did not mess with Hermione's stuff, I thought she should have answered, "Hey, you're welcome to pilfer/wear my skirts" or something that would conjure a funny image.
Anyway, now your story is being romantic. I can't pin you down. First, funny. Then, sweet. Then, dark musings. What literary genre/style would you have next?
Mmmmm.. this is good. Just shows how truly versatile you are. But this site is littered with romantic-type H/Hr stories, so it's kind of not that much unique.
But it was well written.
Now, on to Absolute Truth. OMG, you are keeping me up not sleeping. It's 3:24 in the morning!!!
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Author Feedback: What genre might be next, hmm? Don't have a damned clue. : ) To be honest, I write as it comes to me - 'A Minute for the Snowflakes' is a good indication of that, actually, as it was started out with the intent of being nice and angsty before falling into the cliche plotless fluff.
But that's okay. Fluff is fluff, after all, and valuable in limited quantities.
Glad to see it was well-written, nonetheless. ; )
And, you know, you could hav easily gone to bed and gotten a decent night's sleep - this page isn't going anywhere, and while I'm a bit ashamed with some of my older work, I probably won't be deleting it anypoint soon.
Thanks for reading and leaving such a nice review. |
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Hey hey-
I love this story!! It's so cute and leaves you with a warm fuzzy feeling that makes you wanna go, "awwwwww!!" at the end. I've read your other stories and like those really well too! Keep up the good work!!!
Husker_fan_2006 |
Author Feedback: Gladly. : ) I'm pleased you enjoyed this and the others!
You've my thanks for reading them and leaving a review, too. Hopefully whatever I put out next will be of satisfactory quality. : )
Thanks again! |
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HAHAHAHAHHA they're so cute!! what a romantic story =) ahh fluffy fluffy tushy tushy lol sorry dunno why i said that. anyways, this is a really cute story and i |
Author Feedback: Wow. Uh, I'm sorry, I'm fantastically late responding to this, but I never noticed I had another review. >.<
Thanks for reading, nonetheless, and I'm glad you left a review. : ) |
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Aww...that was really sweet! I liked it a lot! Great fic!  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/07/04
The end line was killer. It summed up a true relationship perfectly:
"I don't need fireworks," he said with a grin, his lips close to hers and a hand cupping her chin. "I just need you."
Thank you so much for writing this piece, it was fantastic. |
Author Feedback: Wow. I've been slacking - I was hardly aware I had a (relatively) new review for this.
Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed the last line - I had similar thoughts to yours the moment I wrote it, and I'm glad the feeling carried over to the readers as well. |
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EllieUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/06/04
Oh, this was so nice... it wasn't insanely fluffy, which was good, and I'm glad it wasn't full of "I love you!"'s... it was very sweet, and it made me smile. Thank you. |
Author Feedback: That's all I can ask for when I write. : )
Thank you for the wonderful review. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/06/04
Beautiful! If I didn't love harry before this,
i do now! very in synch with the characters as
well! Lets see some more shall we? |
Author Feedback: Thank you! I'm very glad I was able to capture the characters, at least in one readers' eyes. : )
And I'm working on the next fic as I write this, so another is on the way, though it is admittedly much different from this one.
Thanks for reading! |
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tkraSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/06/04
What a sweet story! I enjoyed that they didn't need words. And I really agree with that. I have always felt that what Harry and Hermione have is beyond words. Thanks for a great story! |
Author Feedback: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed the read. : ) |
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EschivaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/06/04
awww! sweet short fic! i really liked it was so sweet.you like to use merlin's name in vain don't you knowhtat's morally wrong, just kidding. i like it keep writing  |
Author Feedback: Yes, well, Merlin doesn't appear to mind. : )
Thanks for reading! |
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LieSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/06/04
Cute Story and the way you connected the beginning and the end is impressing
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"It was here, in the black and white,...
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It was here, she knew then, in the black and the white and Harry..."
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Author Feedback: Thank you. : )
'Tis good to see someone liked it. Thanks for reading! |
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awwww that's so sweet. I've no idea how I came to read this story. I think it was a link slipped somewhere in a PM or something like that  hahahhaa
this fic was very visual. I could see these things in my head as I read. Wow that rhymed. LOL
Great job! I will work on plugging it |
Author Feedback: Plug it? Plug it, you say?
I have no idea what you're talking about. *grin*
Thanks for reading! |
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God, that was soo cute! Great mechanical structure and dialogue format if I may say so. The characterization was great; I loved it! |
Author Feedback: Thank you! I certainly appreciate the compliments on the writing style; I'm still magnificently befuddled as to which direction my writing is taking me, so at least I know I have two aspects of it doing well.
Thanks for reading! |
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