RobertkUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/09/06
What a horrible way to end a nice fic. The writing was excellent, but the way that you killed him was rather vauge and unexplanitory. (also very sad)
Great work with the story. Hope to see more from you soon,
Robertk
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abbyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/06/05
wow i loved that story! it was soooo sad though, but dont worry cuz it was good! i love ur fanfics, ur a good author! keep up the good work! |
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sniff sniff that was beautifu, but sad and a tear jerker  |
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azrealSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/07/04
That was amazing! I really really enjoyed it! the ending was soooooo sad Great work though |
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JenUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/07/04
That was a sad story. OMG, I cried so much. I really liked it though-it was great! |
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hey ! i love this story. my best friend was killed this past year and they played this song at her funeral, and i cried my eyes out, as i do anytime i hear this song now, i cried while i was reading this. I love it. thanks.  |
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MusiqueSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/06/04
Omfg!!! So r u gonna continue this??? I take it you will as it is "In Progress" which -duh- excites me!! But maybe that was an accident...I dunno plz tell me!!1 |
Author Feedback: thank you sooo much for your review. actually i didn't have any intentions on continuing this - i don't know how to change the story status...hmmm...but maybe, now that you mentioned it, I might continue it. Dunno yet but I'll think about it! thanks for the review! i appreciate it sooo much!
 sarah may |
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I absolutely loved this! Why did harry have to die? This was a very emotionally charged story and it's well written. Well done- I can appreciate how hard it is to recount death so you've done a really good job using your experiences to create and atmosphere. |
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I had a feeling that was going to be sad. Beautifully done, though. Too bad I'm at work and have to hold the tears in. |
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MissLexiReUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/06/04
That was so sad! Ah, the angst of it all! It was a good story (if very sad) and you did a great job with it. |
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usha88Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/06/04
Wow...that was awesome. Poor Hermione...that was really good. At least we got to know for sometime Harry's life was good. Great job. I'm sorry for your loss that happened, that was really well-written.  I'm not a good writer at all, so I can't really tell you of any improvements..sorry. |
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jembodawgSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/06/04
Oh god... I knew this would be sad. The only time I've ever heard this song be happy was when myself and two friends used it for a wedding skit where a fat guy married a donut... Oh well. Nicely done. |
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And i love the whole harry potter die thing this was awesome