Great story.

I was just listening to this song, and thinking how fitting it could be for a fanfic, so I decided to look and see if anyone else had done one...thus I stumbled across yours!

I like the way you made it like little snapshots of time, it made for an interesting flow. The characters were all very believable, and the dialogue read like natural conversation.

I really liked the part where James and Lily were watching Harry move the doll in his crib. James' reaction was so real and sincere.

Fabulous work, thanks for sharing. The song always brings a tear to my eye as well.

LOVE IT LIKE ALL YOUR FICS I'VE READ MOST OF THEM AND ABOUT TO READ THE OTHERS ! !

i've had unpleasent experiences with that song also. when my uncle died that song was played. i cryed durring your story too. it was wonderful. and full of emotion. you did great.

Again another great story. I cried when Lily was talking to her son when James and Voldemort were battling.

I'm sorry to hear about your friend, but this fic was extremely well written. I love the fact that portkey.org has so many wonderful Harry/Hermione stories, this at one of the top spots!

Okay, so I've said basically the same thing in every review for your stories and I'm sorry. It was WONDERFUL!!! I cried during this one too. My goodness!

totally luv it!! Big thums up!! it was really sad in someparts!! i listened to the song while readig it and i swear there was a puddle of water on the floor!! I printed it off, cuz our computer is in our eating area and my parents had company over!! i didn't want to sry in front of them so i printed it off and read it in my room, but i was soaking my sheets so i went into the bath room and read in on the florr!!

*sniff* I love that song. I used to work at The Disney Store and at Disney World, and they played it all the time...so beautiful. *sigh*

Well done piece. So bittersweet. Thanks for sharing.

Hey. Pretty good job. i liked the way you used a song in the story. It fit in really well with the real series!

I don`t normally like songfics but this was really good. Update soon please

That was a very good story. I can imagine how hard it was for you to write this using that song, but it did fit and you did a great job.

Really liked it. Especially the flashbacks J&L and H&Hr are really alot alike.: Did you ever notice the similarities to Muider & Scully in the X-Files? Quest/Prophecythumbup:

that was just so so sad but brilliant!.. it was excellent.. i loved it.. the songs really went well with what you wrote.. .. again.. that was very good!

Wow! This was such an original and wonderful fic. I loved it! So sweet with the Lily/Harry flashbacks. I'm just curious as to why the doctor said there was something wrong with Harry?

Your story almost had me in tears. It was beautiful. I loved it and hope you continue to write. You rock!