that was cute. well done. you've kept in firm touch with both Harry's and Hermione's characters.

WOW!!!
Realy very very good!!!

please do not stop writing

Beppo Gunnar
Bonn, Germany

I was expecting to hear Hermione say, "Wke up for me, wake up for me and the baby." But she didnt, obviously. Do a sequel!

Wonderful piece. Thank you for writing such a poignant and moving story.

A sequel would be a good idea -- I'm looking forward to more of your writing. Keep up the good work.

*sob* I'm sad to see it end, too! God, that was something special! You've got talent! A sequel would be awesome, by the way. Keep writing!

Ohh gooddie. Good job, I really like that! Nice ending.

-Kat

omg i started crying when hermione went to reach for the letter and read it near the end. it sucks that this will probably end up happening in the books.

U have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have have to do a sequel...that would be sooooooo cool...or if u give me permission i will write it for u!!! Well...till then...ciao!!!

Tear...Tear...Tear...oh my gosh... ...I cant believe he just went and left like that!!! No offense but what a jerk...well off to read the next chapter...ciao

so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so AMAZING!!!! I LOVED it...cant wait to read the next one...ciao!!!

Nice story. Hope to read more of your work soon. Wish it was a little bit longer with a little more detail.

Yay it's done with a Happy Ending.

Good work this is a great story a nice mix of smut & drama. And I hope to read some more of your stories in the future.

Good Luck

And

Good Writing

Thank You

Excellent chapter! I for one wouldn't mind seeing a sequel, maybe something showing the trio's last year at Hogwarts and how Harry and Hermione's relationship progressed.

You did a KIller job! I hope you do have a swquel to this the life and time of a famous quidditch player. thet and what did he do after quidditch. I am certain that HErmione being the smartest witch in Hogwart did not only stay at home. so what I am tryint to say. SEWUEL SEWUEL SEWUEL SEWUEL SEWUEL SEWUEL SEWUEL SEWUEL SEWUEL SEWUEL SEWUEL SEWUEL SEWUEL SEWUEL SEWUEL SEWUEL SEWUEL SEWUEL SEWUEL SEWUEL SEWUEL SEWUEL SEWUEL SEWUEL SEWUEL SEWUEL SEWUEL SEWUEL SEWUEL SEWUEL SEWUEL SEWUEL SEWUEL SEWUEL SEWUEL SEWUEL SEWUEL I hole that is cleart enough.

That was good, it didnt need a fourth chapter. As long as you ended it with their marriage, Im happy.