Oh That was so beautiful! I almost had a cry!
Excellently written fic, just the right length.(any longer and i would have cried!) Good work and please keep writing!

Umm, one question why Harry die? Who''s Lily. And why is his children named after his mom and dad? But it does make since! If this review hurts you in any way, don't tell me about it!

all your stories are fairly well written, but make me sad, which is part of what you're trying to do, so good job.

ohh that's soo sad! omg i can't stop crying today...i've been reading soo good bur sad stories..*snif snif* it's great though!!

Awh. I'm crying. That was so sad. Great story, though. You're very talented.

O WOW I LOVED IT IM ON THE BRIM OF TEARS!

O WOW I LOVED IT IM ON THE BRIM OF TEARS!

Yep, you were right. Tears. Lots of them too.

It was beautiful.

Wonderful yt sad my tears are uncontrolblely falling and there is aknot in my throat.

that was truly amazing. i cryed like a baby. lol. you really have a talent. please keep writing more fics. you're very good at adding alot of emotion into your work, and that really can sometimes be hard, i would know. your awesome!

It was really sad, and a good start, but you could have fleshed out the characters a little more. I know it was a snippet in to lives of characters that we are all supposed to know and love but the story would have been better if it had more substance. It was a good start though. Keep writing....

please explain this whole familt tree thing? i'm just plain confused! harry and mione have a child - james, then he has a child and calls it lily. is that it? i was moved by the content and i do have a tear in my eye. the details just make no sense to me. get back to me please.

that was great!! ive read this five times and i think this is great!!! love it so sad!!

that was so god damn sad! we had a party here today so i printed it off and read it in the bathroom, bawling my eyes out. that was so sad! you have a thing for the 'lying a single rose on the maker that said Harry Potter,Loving Husband, Father, and Friend' youve done somthing like that in most of them!! but i love that! thats the sadest part!!! Im staill crying!! i listenex to the song and it just gave me another reason to cry!!!

Okay, you know that tear threatening to fall from your songfic of The Wing Beneath My Wings? Well, it fell. And then another and another and another... you have a knack for making people cry. Err...I guess you can take that as a compliment. Good job, well-done, hope to hear from you soon!