You should attempt to make your plot development more subtle, other than that, good job.

The back story you gave Christian was a bit too convienient (sp?). If you revise this story or write another one, you might want to work in a little more detail.

Nice introduction. Could use a little more length but very well written. Keep up the good work.

This story was a lot better than I originally thought it would be, relationship stories normally send me running out the nearest door. I was lucky to find a link to it on Schnoogle. Incredible story and I even had trouble finding mistakes. That alone was quite a surprise.

Excellent story!

cool story. I don't usually review until the end, but I really like this. I remember starting this a month or so ago, but not getting past the first chapter. I'm hooked now though. Ok, I'm off!

hi,very nicely written,specialy the reunion of harry-herm.ron's character was very vagely defined,couldn't make out much.it would have been better to leave it out completely.anyways,a very good story,specially the amazing powers both of them had,mind boggling.best of luck for future work.

*claps*... I'm speachless, really... all I can do is clap... *claps again* ... Amazing fic. Loved the ending.

Heehee, good ending! And good riddance to Tom, as well as the two Malfoy. Though I had wished that this story is longer, since good stories are hard to come by...

Anyway, will be looking out for more great works from you...

Ahh...so now we know how Tommy can be so powerful, well, no matter. Harry and Hermione will cut him down more than a few pegs when they are both ready.

Heehee, I lik the part where Harry pout about not being normal even among the Children, though I'm wondering how the Children manage to actually keep records of their own history, suc as the fact that the most powerful before Harry only had about 9 talents. Heehee, so event though Harry could have both Mind-reading and Soul-searching, he actually have something better, a combo of both. Wonders if Hermione have such combinations as well.

And when is Dumbledore going to teach them how to hide their talents?

ok, so the truth is out, and the two of them plus the OOTP is going to be revealed to the wizarding world...well, can't say i like it, but i don't exactly dislike it either.

Hmm..so looks like Ron finally found another someone who manage to change him, though i wonder for how long will this least, before his egocentric nature surface again.

Heehee, looks like Harry dread the meeting he is going to have with his future in-laws. The part where Hermione told him that she is going to tell her parents about them, and his reaction to it was kinda expected, but still funny.

I like your story, each new chapter answer most if not all, of the questions that came up from the previous chapter.

Yay!!! They made up big time...Hope they will be able to take it further...

Hmm, so Voldie decides to gate crash the gathering when the announment is going to be made, but will he be attacking Hogwarts as well, I kinda suspect that he let purposely allow the infomation to leak out so that he can pull away majority of the Hogwarts protectors.

Well great story so far, and am still enjoying reading, haven't had a new interesting story for quite so time already...

Yay!!!!They argue, they apologise, they made up, they discovered, and they took a step further!!!


Hmm, who's the idiot who decide to interrupt their precious time...ought to be kick out of the room, Harry better remember to lock the door the next time they use the place.

Are those 3-4 voices takling about the heirs of the 4 founders? If so, the undiscovered one would be the badger...Weasley? or Malfoy? or Susan? or Hannah? or someone else?

Just curious, why is Harry afraid of Hermione overshadowing him? It somehow doesn't make sense to me...

Too bad Hermione have had those dreams and figured out who Harry/Christian/Golden Mask is..Well that's what Harry deserved for procastinating telling her the truth, he should have realised by now that his brilliant friend could figure out most things, given time...

I can only hope that the two will patch up soon...

Another thing that i felt funny was the fact that Harry actually know of the people around him that was making use of him and yet he didn't mind, which seem a little OOC, even with his Citatio powers and what not...

Whatever, at least the story is brilliant enuff to ekep me interested.

hmm...looks like Draco is beginning to suspect Harry...

I like how the two of them have so many thoughts going through their heads, how they both seems to want to do more for each other and yet didn't...

Was shock to read that Ron have DE contacts, now where did that come from> Percy? or Draco?

Well, hope sparks do fly between the two, no matter how little

Yay, so Hermione is the pectal. Yay!!! Hmm, how powerful was the stunner that Harry stored in the crystal ball anyway, and how many times did Hermione magnify its power when she throw Harry back.

Ok, so now we got a pair of kids that need to learn to forgive and trust each other again. If Hermione knows where to find him, I believe she would definitely apologise, though it might take a little more for Harry to forgive her.

But then, even if he don't forgive her, they will still have to work together in order to destro Voldie.

Hey, just realise something, wouldn't Harry and Hermione be cousins many times removed as well, though i think this is the first story that I have read in which Hermione is the heir of Salazar Slytherin