"But it's November now, and you were done mourning in September, when we started the knew year, remember?" I think you want "new" not "knew".

"...so they can cry in the sun" WOW. That almost made me cry. I, too, have used the rain as a cover for crying, but this was beautiful. NICE WORK!

As I write this my eyes are filled to the brim with tears that fall slowly. This was just absolutely *hic* abs *sniff* heart *whimper* wrenching. Are you KIDDING me?! This is absolutely bloody brilliant. It touches the heart so much! My god, I haven't read a angsty beautiful story in a long time and god I am going to start crying so much.

You show the depth of the character's so much, their emotions. It's as if you're THEM. You're Harry, You're Ron and You're Hermione. My heart is aching but it's written so beautifully, you have mad skills. This is one of the deepest stories I have ever read about Harry and Hermione, OMG this is so-
YOu make me speechless! This is- an absolute maasterpiece, the flow it's written with the words oh god that speech my god how can you write so amazingly!?!? And the conviction and voice you write with is absolutely stunning

xoxo
Hana

Wow, I think this is awesome. Yea, I'm going in "review all of your stories" mode.

Wow, even though you appear not to think very highly of this piece, I think that it is one of the bests that you have written. though I must admit that I am noticing a trend in you writing; one of the trio usually dies. Part of me finds it disturbing and having a loss of hope, and the other part, the bigger part, as much as I hate to admit it, knows that one of the trio will most likely die. From my point of view, Ron would be the best, seeing as how I am an ardent supporter of Harry and Hermione. Though my heart wishes to believe this, my head tells me that Harry will have to either face death or the death of Hermione.
As much as I hate character death, I find your stories very compelling to read, as I have read most of the orange labled ones tonight, or this morning, seeing as though it has reached the morning hours. That is proof that you are a very good writer, I do not usually stay awake this early. I look forward to reading more of your work though, even if I have to stay up until four.
I wish you luck in your writing, and look forward to your next story!

My heart is so battered from reading about either Harry's death/effects of Hermione, or Hermione's death/effects on Harry in this website. Yet I continue reading them. I am such a masochist!

Sniffle sniffle ...... O god.... wahhhhahhha.
( gasp ..... wah.... sniff sniff ok that was beautifuland sad and oh darn!! gasp... gasp....waaahh ... I dont know if it was supposed to make us feel sad but it made me feel sad..... gasp.... if only my friends could see me now, theyd think i was insane.... anyways good job i like all of you storys by the way keep it up...... *runs off sobbing*

Oh..
What a beautiful story..

But it was sad. Really sad..
Everytime it is raining I gonna think about Harry..

(Excuse me for my english. I'm swedish)

i didnt mind the plotlessness at all, it made it good...!

Wow. REally beautiful and powerful. You wrote so well and with deep words a magnificient range of emotions. Wonderful story. thanks.

Wow. That was truly touching and very well written! I loved it! It was so sad!

You just made me cry damn you! That was beautiful.

I've always said that a sign of a truly good piece of writing/film is if it can make you show real emotion - ie, crying, laughter, etc. Well you just did it so I don't think I need to explain how good I thought this was.

Excellent work sweetie.

Sorry! I pressed the wrong button by mistake! but anyways, i nominated you. did I also tell you that my email has changed? its now phoenix_writer456@hotmail.com - I had someone going on my email. Are you going to update the sequel ( no memory for names!)soon? It was my birthday the other day! yay!it was loads of fun.. So... your fa,ily still accusing you of being fanfic and HP mad? mine is !!! my mum is constantly rabbiting on about the time i spend on the comp. I'm properly starting my book!! I;'ve finshed detailed palnning of the beginning and am going to start writing properly in two weeks , when school is over. then i can write through the holidays. anyways, i have babbled on for ages, so hope you are well and i loved this leetle fic-y

christ lady, you got me all teary! Are you on a mission to ruin my mascara? great little thingy! i enjoyed it ( in the way that you enjoy sad books.. y'no that sad, cying but still strangly happy feeling?!?! no, well thats because I'm speaking junk.)So, how are you? you seem to not be around much - not that i can talk, I've been offline for 3 days... blah blah, i really don't know what to write. Did I tell you that I nominated Depression in the Portkey awards? well ,i did.

Definitely one of the oddest and probably most spontanious fics out there, very nice!

Damn rain... No, actually I think that this has a plot. Not really good worked out, but a plot, neverteless. It was rather sad, and that isn't really my genre, espesialy not when I actually should be sleeping.