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wow, I'm not sure quite what to think. I mean, I love reading it. you're really very descriptive and all. I think maybe you should try, I don't know, drawing it out a tad more? not making it boring or anything (which it most certainly isn't) but every-so-often it seems like some parts or missing or that time is passing WAY too quickly. but since chapter one I have *definitely* seen a lot about this story that I like a whole lot, and I hope that you'll update it soon |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/01/06
Shouldn't Hary be going out with Hermione? Thats what I thought the rules were... |
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Wow! This story is soo coll, also thats really good how you have put Ginny with bulemia it really puts a slice of reality into it a great fic Luv Ama XX |
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mmm draco!!! also i wish u hadnt made blaise gay! nothing against gay but i dont think blaise is ! he's as hot s draco in my opinion- i know this site is limited to ships but i also like ginny/blaise fics but there arent too many of them. i love the story! |
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monagy3Signed | Chapter : 7 | Date : 11/07/05
is ginny getting anoroxia? will malfoy realise.. i hope he does...love the story so far |
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Very good! I understand the whole, eating disorder thing, i also understand the Draco thing, if i was tempted with a Delicious Devil like that, i would also let him take my virginity! Great story, i hope you update soon.
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this is very good. love when muggle conditions are part of stories |
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BoeSigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 08/03/05
Dear Draco,
I've been contemplating your offer for a while and I believe that it's a shame to waste such an offer and I've decided to accept. If it's still available, of course. Meet me in front of the Room of Requirement tomorrow at 10:30 pm. I'm sure you know where it is located.
=> So Ginny decided to go with Malfoy's offer
And what the hell happened between Blaise and Collin. So they're bouth gay and now they're a couple or what?
Nice
Can't wait for the update
Love and kisses.
The belgian girl |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 07/03/05
wow! this fic is great! keep up the great writing and i cant wait for another update!!!=D |
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DraillaSigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 07/03/05
OOOh I like it! She started on her ED just like I did on mine, foolish girl  Update soon! I wanna read the rest. *loves Blaise/Collin hehe* |
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reemySigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 07/03/05
this story is not bad but it could be a lot better.
first of all the characters are a bit out of character but then maybe that was on purpose and that's your choice.
and secondly what is it with all the swearing?? i have nothing against swearing once or twice but not 10 times every paragraph!!!!! there are a lot of other (BETTER) ways to show frustration, hate...etc
it is not by making your characters swear every 2 mins that you're gonna improve your writing, As a matter of fact it's a put off.
when it is well placed it can emphasize something (especially when it is used by only one or two characters at the most (give your characters their own personality),not all of them) but when overly used it just makes your characters 'vulgar' thus not appealing. and that's not good for your story.
a good thing to do is to read JKR carefully. she discribed very well the rivalry and hate between harry and draco without making either of them swear (not once!). |
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i reallt like it so far, its very detailed, and i like that cant wait to read on!! |
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o boy haha tom should be interesting i really like this story i just started reading it today haha the colin and blaise thing amuses me... update soon |
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divSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 14/12/04
Gosh! What's going on with Ginny and Blaise? Hmm... will we be seeing a totally jealous Draco??? |
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Wow....its intresting really. Blaise seems like a gentleman, but I'd think he'd notice Ginny's "problem", spending all that time together. I think, from your writing that maybe Draco's subconciously realizing there's a problem....I don't know....I always look past the actual meanings of words...lol...anyway good job, this is a really good story so far! |
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