its really great. do continue to write. extremely enjoyable. thanks for the 2 chaps.

hey

this is a good story. i think you need to work on your editing skills. some of the punctuation wasn't correct. but it really was a good story!

luv ya.......mwaa

Ginnie

i enjoy the man in the color that was a cool in a blue dime

That was a cute story.I liked it. I think that you could have probably done a little more to make it a little more interesting. but i like the plot and all. you did good.

Well, that was interesting. I liked it. It was a little strange but i definatly liked it. Great job!

Great story but kind of short. So that is all? Are you continuing the story?

well this story was sweet, yes sweet - well the first chapter was - um - "different" material than the second, it was a great fic

WOW this story so far is turning out great i can't wait to read the next chapter to see what happens

Hmm...interesting fic. Where on earth did she learn to dane like that and become spontaneous? Good Job!
lov lots,
LuNaG

i thought it was simply amazing. well done i think
the way you expressed the love of harry and hermione as a slip into a nother deminsion

i thought it was simply amazing. well done i think
the way you expressed the passion of the moment as harry and hermione as a sliped into a nother deminsion

great story! short, yet sweet. i liked the plot - it was a nice story. :]

wow nice story...very detailed, which i like. keep up the good work

that was great!!!! you should write more often.
well i have to go. bye

Well, that was very cute.. I liked the confession bit and the kiss sounded so sweet! I thought it was a bit sudden how she immediately took him off to give him a private dance, though. Keep up the good work.