prue1912Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 09/04/05
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Love, I really like your stories, but you need a beta (or another one) quite badly. Well, not quite badly ... it would just be a good idea. The ideas are good but I find myself distracted from your wonderful, imaginative stories by large grammar, spelling, and misuse of words mistakes. |
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monagy3Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 09/02/05
yep...sweet isnt it...i do hope to hear from u sooner...its beem just too long..but its nice the chapter i mean... |
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AdrialSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 03/02/05
oh...i really don't wanna sound like an obnoxious fanatic of HP or anything, but you might want to correct the name of Hogwart's Willow. It's Whomping Willow...not Whooping. Though, whooping is kind of funny, too.
cute fic so far! |
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That was cute!!  hehe Ginny knows how to get what she wants hehe!! Nicely written |
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DraillaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/02/05
I didn't really like that way it was written. It was a cute story overrall, but it seemed rushed. And didn't Ginny mention twins?
I also think the running use of "incredible" and "horribly" turned me off.
4/5 out of 10....sorry, sucks to get iffy reviews! |
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Oh, the joys of being pregnant and past your due date. Draco does try to placate her mood swings, but like any male, it seems to be too much for him!
I loved the part where she grabbed his collar and threatened him. Poor guy, what could he have done?
I have to admit though, I am a bit confused. When Ginny makes the comment "I'll be kicked out of the mansion with twins in my hand.." I assumed that she was pregnant with twins. Was I mistaken?
I also wonder if Draco will get his way about naming her Annie. lol I'm sure that he won't if Ginny has anything to say about it! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/08/04
 i really enjoyed this. I think that Gin and draco would be so cut together |
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Dearg-DueSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/08/04
that was so cute...  you must write more! update soon plz! |
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NannynUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/08/04
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/08/04
This is the best story I have read in a million years and I really, really, really hope you write more very soon. |
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bigred20Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/07/04
this is so cute that you have to keep updating us it si great |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/07/04
this was a great story please update it i can't wait to read more |
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