OMG
Of course you should write more!!
I am in love with this story so much I added you to my alert
cheers
:wOOt:

YES!!!!! I love it! It's a little jumpy; I didn't follow Harry through the forest... but oh well. I like it!

Kenji

That was Brilliant!!!! You did a Fantastic Job!!!! I most definitely hope that you write more of it. I loved it!

And then? This is like a giant tease dude. Really. The same chapter twice! I'm all like, OKAY! What's gonna happen next!??! and geared up for it like a preteen for a justin timberlake concert. But no. Just the same chapter again. But hey, it's gravy. So, I will repeat myself here, then. I can't wait to see what happens next! Your writing style I find to be amazing, and lyrical.

I'm a bit curious about the clearing though, and that funky little flowery thing. Perhaps it's a portkey or something? Maybe some part of a devious plan to kill Harry. Who knows.

Oh wow! Keep up the great work with the writing, I cannot wait to see what happens next! I especially love the EXTREMELY odd concoction of flowers: the lillies, roses, and lillacs. I've never heard of that particular combination before.

um... yes... please do continue, i must know what happens!!

This is rather intriguing; two chapters which seem to be the same (or at least, the start and end are the same :confused: ) but anyway ...

There is something ... *different* about this story. Something which is unique and striking, something that draws you in and makes you wonder ... realize that you know the answers but couldn't be sure ... so many things left unsaid but for which one's mind starts to provide possibilities and answers ...

And yet, beneath it all, is that sense of *wonder.*

There is a sense of voyeurism, of feeling like a Peeping Tom as one walks through the myriad of emotions that Harry goes through -- and senses also the tangle of feelings that Hermione carries within her. And yet, as one watches them through the various stages of interaction ... one cannot help but feel ... honored, perhaps, is the best way to describe it.

There is a sense of being allowed a peek into a private world, of being allowed a chance to see the thoughts and feelings and emotions of each other -- and, surprisingly, even though there seems to be so many things left unsaid or unanswered ... there is the sense of *not needing* to hear about it, see it or even feel it.

It is enough to have been there and know what they are going through; to be there in spirit (as it were) and *emphatize* with what they go through.

And for this ...

:sigh:

A most lovely work.



gil

wow, usually i hate fics where the grangers die, but your wonderful writing made up for it! the h/hr was beautiful! the emotions they felt were eloquently described!

Yes, I think you should continue. Its a very good beginning. hopefully, things will work out between the duo(H/Hr). the next chapter will make it only that much more interesting

That was pretty cool, you should continue it. I look forward to the next one.

This story has promise and sounds really interesting. I think you did a good job. However, you have a lot of typos throughout the chapter and it's kind of distracting when you read.

Awesome cant wait for more. Keep up the great work!! Love the length of the chapter, i wish more chapters were this long. Make sure your next one is.

Yes, yes, yes! Must write more! You can't just stop! Well, actually you can... it would still be good if you ended it with that. But, you should write more just for the hell of it!

Please keep going..

I wanna know whats going to happen really its a great start

This story can`t be complete I need mors harry hermione action I need closure update this soon please!!!