That was so cute!! I really like it a lot!

You can probably extend this into a full fic and do a good job with it. I've got something like that going in my fic, so I know it is plausible. Really good job. Liked it a lot.

Awwww. How very sweet. And a nice way for Harry to "wake up," in all senses.

that was pure fluff, eh?
i suppose it was kinda cute. i like the angel reference. i have an obsession with pick-up lines at the moment (especially cheesy ones) and that reminded me of some of them.
anyway, good for short, PG13 fluff.

all together now! awwwwwwwwww!!!!! that was so sweet! i loved you sneaking in 'wealey is our king' that's my favorite song! (the gryffie version of course! ) great job!

heheh! ^_^ Short and sweet! Nice story!! I like the Quidditch fluffy stories! They are the best

Nuh-uh i absolutley REFUSE you to end it here! please make a sequal! It's SOOOOOOOOO good!! please concider it need....to...know...what...happens...next!!

A little strange, a little too short. Not bad writing, but I can't say I cared for the plot. I think that it just ended too soon without enough explanations of their feelings. Oh, well, it's not like it was horrible, so don't worry!

Aww... *tear* Quidditch is great... But fluffy Quidditch is ever better...