people please leave reviews!!!! i really want to see what happens next!!!!!!

This was good, please continue. I can't wait until she meets Harry!

Drats and here I was thinking Ashton was someone under cover of some glamours & charmwork. It looks like Hermione will be seeing England after all. Oh...errr...until the end of this chapter I didn't really realize she was in America, you may wanna add something to that effect (that or I may wanna go to the occulist and get a new prescription for my glasses...). Intresting story by the way. I'm definately looking forward to the introduction of Mr. Potter the First of the name of Harry.

Really good idea, even though I am a bit confused right now. I'm wondering how Harry will come into this. I thought maybe Harry was Ashton in disguise, but now she is going to a school in England where she could possibly meet Harry. Oh well, please continue soon!

This is really good so far. I wonder where your going to take it. If never read anything like this before and I like it a lot!

Blah...Me second name T'would be Ashton...he stole my name! hah! interesting story! bump!

Hey, I just read your story like your told me to, this is a really good story! If you don't continue, I shall go nuts!

This story is very interesting! I'd be keeping an eye for updates! This Ashton guy is quite mysterious.

though I have read 2 chapters I can't make a lot out of it.So maybe the extrange trip will clear up.

Ah, now you are making me question whether Ashton is really Ashton and not Harry or that -- bah, forget it. I won't assume things. Anyway I like it so far. *adds to favorites*

Interesting premise so far. I am wondering what type of school she is going to be going to though - and what was up with that paper? Good job!

Where's Harry? He sounds so much like Ashton. *sigh* ME and my fantasies!

Anyway poor Hermione! She finally finds a friend and then she has to decide whether she wants to go on an exchange trip! And in any case, if it hadn't been for Ashton, I don't think she would have even had a second thought about going! Oh well, life is strange at times!
Damn this is one long review!

ah. She goes to England, that's a start. It looks like your writting is indeed making up for the (temporary) lac of magic. I didn't saw anything magical in chapter 1, but as you say that there is a bit, I must have readen over it. Sorry if that's the case. you also complain that I already draw conclusions. I have reasens to do so. At this moment, the story can still go very good or very bad, depending on the writter. I think that I should say wath I like, and if some other people do that to, you will know a bit more abouth the readers taste. That, of course, also means you know better what you have to write to make this something good, and you probaly want to do that. You can still work out your own style, if you want to, and in the end, it's possible that your style was better (I can't look into the futur, and I have no idea what you are planning to do with the story.) There is still one more thing. You obviously wanted to comment my privious review. For now, it is still clear wich one you wanted, since, at the moment of writting, i'm the only one who really complains abouth something (I like complaining). But, in later chapters, when you probaly get more reviews, It is way less clear, and it would be better to start with the user name of the one you are responding to. Most autors that respond do so, and I was actually surprissed to see that you didn't. In this caser it would have been davaca.
One last thing (finaly...). You say you update this because of your smal mistake. That would probaly mean you have already a part of this story, ot maybe the whole story, finished (unless you wrote very fast). Just update, then. I don't like it when autors just wait to update to get some reviews. That is frustrating, you know.

So - you're finding a way to get her to England - that's definitely helpful

Nice writing. Good grammar and structure. Very nice. Please continue