This was an awesome story. I love it. You portrayed Hermione and Harry's passion wondrously. Keep writing. You're really good at it.

well, for your first try at this sort of fic, then i think that you did awsome! And yes i really did enjoy it. i hope that you write more like this. it was great. Now, off to bed. lol

I've read this fic before but I came back to read it again because it's so damn hot. Excellent job!

That was a good story. It seems like something like that could actually happen in the book series. Not to that magnitude of course.

Now THIS is how fanfic should go. It's sexy without being too smutty. I love the tenderness of the scene.

that was adorable (sp?) can you continue it? i dunno maybe have him come back to Hermione with his child *smirks*

Awww, I liked this, sweet and smutty - an excellent combination. Thanks for this, well done.

Pretty racy. Not bad if this is your first attempt at NC-17. Kept my attention.

it was good but you sould really make it a bit longer

I love the way you described their first time together. very real and sweet.

awwwwwwwwwwwww that was sooooooooooo cute i sure do hope he gets outta this one so that he can c her again i loved ur story every part of it hope 2 hear from u soon!!!!

Aw, what a sweet story! Loved how everything happened under the rain... and how it stopped raining when they finished. Although, I'm sure they were so vocal that all of Hogwarts know exactly what they were up to... good job!

Hmmm.. I wonder how many people would be willing to duel Voldemort to the death for that... really

Such a nice sweet, dirty story. I liked it, good writing.

your first attempt??? Ohmigod, that was brilliant, I haven't even read a romance novel like that before and I read alot of them. :O I am just moved by this story and the details you give made me feel as though I were Hermione...wow

write more PLEASE

Jenna Kat