Your sentence structure was great and I liked that it was hot, but not disgustingly pornographic. It was very maturely done and damn if H/Hr don't deserve a little lovin!

Sweet! Smuty but inocent at the same time. I really enjoyed this fic. I'll start on the other you've read soon!

Too good. I loved it soooo much! Keep up the amazing work- can't wait to see what else you've got in store.

lil_irish_girl

Talk about bittersweet! Did they ever meet again after the battle or was it really their last encounter?

Wow. That was really good and you write extremely well.

P.S. Did you notice that you wrote "firm nod" about five times. Don't take this as a flame I love the story.

DandyLion

that was a really cute story...you should continue writing keep it up!

This was a really beautiful romance. I adored the way you wrote the intercourse scenes, in a romantic way, not some hard-core porn stuff. I could actually see them, smell them and hear them. This "Rain" was a beautiful piece, and even though I know Ginny will be Ginevra Potter in the next book...your Harry and Hermione relationship seems very authentic.
Very good descriptions, and I like how you didn't use, "vagina", "dick" or "titis"
You used the neo-scientific terms. The sex in this fanfic isn't porn, so if anybody says anything different...SCREW THEM!!!
It's a very mature piece...very weird location. Right under the noses of the Hogwarts ghosts!
LOL

This was a really beautiful romance. I adored the way you wrote the intercourse scenes, in a romantic way, not some hard-core porn stuff. I could actually see them, smell them and hear them. This "Rain" was a beautiful piece, and even though I know Ginny will be Ginevra Potter in the next book...your Harry and Hermione relationship seems very authentic.
Very good descriptions, and I like how you didn't use, "vagina", "dick" or "titis"
You used the neo-scientific terms. The sex in this fanfic isn't porn, so if anybody says anything different...SCREW THEM!!!
It's a very mature piece...very weird location. Right under the noses of the Hogwarts ghosts!
LOL

Great story; you kept my attention well and the sentences flows very smoothly.

I was curious to read your fic because the summary reminded me of Cloud/Tifa's (supposedly) 'Sex Under The Highwind' scene in FFVII. Er-- you do play Final Fantasy games, since your username is called 'Zanarkand', right?

Of course, I changed my mind once I read the story, but I'd just like to point that out.

That was a really great story! I just love reading H/Hr fics and this one just made my day

I liked that a lot. For a while I've been toying with a fic similar in premise to this one. Though I doubt mine will be a full on lemon (NC-17). Great, hot, fic!

Wow. That was incredibly passionate. It felt like I was up in that tower watching them in this moment. It feels naughty. Thanks.

Wow. That was incredibly passionate. It felt like I was up in that tower watching them in this moment. It feels naughty. Thanks.

nice one, mate!
pretty good fic indeed...
I'm portuguese do you have msn?

Wow!! Great piece of fiction.. romantic, hot..! I loved all of it . But it was kinda sad too, knowing that the next day he'll go fight Voldemort...
Awesome work
Leslie