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See, this was a really good idea for a story, and a very good way to execute it, but I had a problem with the typos. Maybe I'm just overly picky about this kind of thing, but for me it detracted from the story. I'd be glad to offer my services as proofreader if you'd like. But it was a good story. |
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CallieUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/11/05
i'm pretty sure i've said it before (in your other stories) but i'll say it again, you are on my top 5 list of best authors here at PK. I love all your stories.
Come on, who doesn't like fluff?
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/09/05
LOVED IT. As a girl who goes through the same feelings as hermione..i completley connected to what she was going through. Brilliant! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/08/05
This is one of my favorite stories. I absolutely love it! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/06/05
I love this story!! It is one of my favorites!! I feel so bad for Hermione though, I'm glad that my cramps don't hurt as bad as hers when it's my time of the month. Great story! PERFECT 10/10!! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/05/05
Hello! This was a very good story. I feel so sorry for Hermione! I mean, I get cramps when mine comes, but not that bad. I mean, all I have to do is take 2 Advil pills, wait about 30 minutes and I'm pretty much all better. Anyway, great story! Also, please update "Harry's Seventh Year aka Circle of Friends" soon please, it's one of my favorite stories. 10/10!! |
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This is so sweet. I always love it when their love comes through first, and the rest of it follows. |
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lierianSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/02/05
Cute. My favorite part was "His mind was on Hermione and he was worried about her, and when he worried about her, there was no room left in his brain to concentrate on anything else." I loved that.
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Aahhh that was so sweet and cute! You are definitly a great writer. I just love your stories. Keep up the good work. |
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Aww, that was sweet. I like it. I tell ya, there is nothing better than having a sympathetic, proactive man around when you've got cramps like that ... |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/12/04
awww  ... that was so sweet of Harry ... Nice story!  Very enticing to read. I'm pretty sure Hermione had no complaints about her new 'medicine' . |
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TovaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/11/04
I wish Harry was here now with me
You make Harry so adorable that I want him by myself..  But everyone knows that he belongs to Hermione  . Harry  Hermione.
Well  Now I'm gonna read the other stories that you written  I think they are wonderfull to, just like this
And excuse me for my bad english.. Just have it in school for 6 years and.. well, I'm not so good at it  I like more to read english than to write..
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Aww...  That was really good. Hehehe...though I think Hermione will be "needing" her "medicine" more then once a month.  Great fic! |
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jchaserSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/10/04
What a sweet story. I really enjoyed their dialogue...it sounded just like them from JKR's books. It was also nice to have a guy be so helpful and kind like that too. Your writing is just wonderful! |
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Dreamer17Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/10/04
What a delightful story! It made me feel all warm and fuzzy. I love fluff when it's well done! |
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