how nice this was a grrrrrrrreat story please write more
i know i'm annoying

That was very cute. A bit short, but very cute.

I love it. Is so sweet. short, but very good.
Ilove the way you put all the emosion in the last lines.

Short but sweet. . . .any chance of a longer version? It was so good i didnt want it to end so soon!!!

Aww, a very fluffy moment. However I do agree with Muirnin that it could do with a bit more filler. Then again, fluff isn't really supposed to be all that long, is it? Great job, as always.

Nielle, who is about to be Evil.

You are right... this is exrremely short...

It's not always necessary to end plot bunnies so quickly... I think you could have expanded on this story a bit more... given it a plot of sorts... The way it is right now is just kind of a jotting down of a thought... and not really a story...

I've read some of your other work and you have the potential to be a good writer...

Plot bunnies are like baking bread... you need yeast to make them rise or they just fall flat...

Hi Jennifer!! finally I'm starting to read your work (about time!). I loved this ficlet! Is very sweet. Maybe you could continue it?? *is trying not to sound too eager*

how sad and how cute at the same time.

i'd love to see evryone's reaction when they come down and see this sight

Awww, how sweet! You should continue this and make it a bit longer. Very very cute! I just love Harry and Hermione together!
Nice job!

awww....now that was really really sweet. I loved the ending, that was just so,...right. It seems like it could really happen. nicely done.

Aw that is so sweet. is there another storie you wrote because you are a good writer.

That is short, all right. Very sweet scene nonetheless. Canon-like hints of H/H.

awww....very cute, very sweet. i wish it was longer though, it had so much potential to be a long chapter story lol

Oh, that's so sweet. Love your style of writing. That bit about the wind was cool. I could imagine the cold wind blowing outside of the castle. Very good. Please continue.

so sweet! i love that she falls asleep on his shoulder beautiful!