Goodness! This is quite hot. And funny. Your Narcissa Malfoy and bad guys are endearing. Harry is hilarious. Totally entertaining.

You also have an awesome favorites list. Hope you keep churning out fics and adding to your favorites.

great story, I really liked it.. read this shorter one before reading your longer fics just in case I didn't like your writing style, don't worry, I like it..

my only concern is your use for née.. if I'm not mistaken, it should be Hermione Potter née Granger.. hehe just have a mild case of OCC when reading fics.. cheers!

I have just started reading this story and i m simply loving it. Thumbs up for u

In my humble opinion i think this story is great. You have taken the Potter universe and made it your own in the way you write and tell your story.
You draw the readers into your story and make them live it. And that is a truly remarkable feat. I hope you will continue making these kind of stories.

*tiny sigh* Again, I love. I must admit, I stopped leaning toward a Hermione and Harry coupling pretty early in the series, once more information was produced about Ginny. Then again, I'm a sucker for unrequited love! Comes with suffering from it yourself, I suppose. But reading your stories gives me little tingles down to my toes, and I have to admit, it makes it much easier picturing them together the way you write them.

Wonderfully done. I look forward to reading the rest of your stories. (Which I intend to do with much more swiftness than from when I last read and reviewed, I assure you!)

Wow. Luna Lovegood being sneaky and doing something under-handed. Never would have seen that coming. Intriguing, certainly, but never saw it coming!

i've never read a paragraph with tons of "and" in it.. and is to say, it was the part where HHr had sex ahahah! anyways, i really enjoyed this story.. NICE!!!e

This is a wickedly brilliant fic! The humor from the beginning kept me hooked - imagine hooligans from the dark side plotting to get Harry & Hermione together, of course not without the help of a smart Ravenclaw.

This is the first time I've stumbled upon one of your fics. Too bad restrictedsection.org is blocked in the country where I reside right now. But I can read your other fics in Portkey. I'm adding this fic to my fave stories, and you to my fave authors

So, that story turned out great. Even if it did cause me to yell out loud and run up the hall and whatnot. Thank you for the good laugh.

Ha Ha Hermione actually says out loud the second she recognizes Harry. Cringe!!! I don't even know if I can look at the page. Major embarrassment... heavy on the bare... Now I have to read through the cracks in my fingers!

That was awesome ... didn't seem like you first attempt at a multipart completely humor fic and the last chapter was amazing ... continue writing things like this !

I love how the dark side of the wizardin world has been influenced by muggle gangster movies haha

it was really nice. i enjoyed it. lol. good work. i already read the adult version of chapter 6, so this is the end for me here. good job!

ha ha ha. she dreamed of catching the snitch. lol. ;] good analysis.

this was too fun. nice work there. i wasnt expecting Hermione to attack.