Hi...good story and I'm looking forward to the conclusion. However, I'm a bit disappointed now that you mention that it's taken a year between updates. I don't know if I have that kind of attention span. I fear I'll go off and read others...gotta have the fix, you know?

I'm so glad you're back!! Keep those updates coming - why not! Excellent chapter in a very intriguing story. Well done.

So this is it, the final battle... You know, I am oft surprised at how rarely that mass firing tactic you described is used. I would think it perfect against things like dragons, or even Nundu. Instead Rowling and others tend to have the wizards running about randomly, sending spells when they can. Good job, and good tactical sense.

I know what you mean, though I didn't really start reading HP Fanfiction until after HBP, and only then because I was so disappointed in it. I still have times where I retreat back to Ranma 1/2, though.

I know what you mean, though I didn't really start reading HP Fanfiction until after HBP, and only then because I was so disappointed in it. I still have times where I retreat back to Ranma 1/2, though.

Hi Kai Lun Mau,

Have to agree with you there. I don't think it matter what you write, it would almost be better than whatever you would call the crap that JKR last 2 books...

That aside I am tremendously enjoying this story and hope that there is enough interest in the story for you to continue publishing it (though hopefully without the year wait XD). As I think this would be a waste of a great story if it was simply added to the 'abandoned' category.

However for a bit of friendly advice... I find myself struggling to fully understand the entire story as you tend to 'gloss' things over or just simply over simplify them. Try to stretch the chapters out a bit more and go into more 'depth' with the main points.

That said it's your writing style so if it don't work or doesn't feel comfortable... then don't do it.

Eagerly awaiting another chapter,
Andrew

Hi Kai Lun Mau,

Have to agree with you. I don't think it matter what you write it would almost be better than whatever you would call that crap that JKR put out in the last 2 books....

Mind you I am throughly enjoying reading you stories. They can be a bit too 'short' in describing certain things which makes reading somewhat confusing. Yet overall a very enjoyable read.

I just hope that you have enough interest in the story to continue on, as I think it would be a waste of a great story for it to be added to the 'abandoned' pile.

After reading DH I have to say that you are doing a great job with this one.

I am really enjoying this story. I like the fact that someone stood up to the Headmaster and put him in his place for a change. Keep it going.

I just wanted to let you know that I am very interested in teh direction of your story. I really like the Fics that make Harry out to taking care of himself instead of staying at the Privet Dr and just dealing. Keep up the good job and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Well, that was an interesting chapter... don't really know what else to say... except on to the next one.

I agree with your description of Ron being a jealous prat. There is truly no other way to put it. Anyway, I liked it. On to the next chapter.

That was a rather...interesting threat... Anyway, I love it when Dumbledore is being the manipulitive jacka** that we all know him to be. When I first read the fifth book I started to call him "Dumbledork" and now that is my new pet name for him. Anyway, on to the next chapter.

Harry's coming into his power... I love it!! It makes so much sense to me. I like the semi-fast pace of this fic. It tells me that there will be little nonsense, and that is something I like to see little of. On to the next chapter.

Ok, a little fast, but believable to a certain point. I like that the red eyes came up. Every one has a dark side, especially Harry with who he has in his brain. On to the next chapter.