NityaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/05/04
Wow. Just wow. I love your writing, Kalie - it's really powerful. Their emoticons are exactly how I imagine they'd feel after OOTP. Actually, after everything that's happened.
And the ending? Priceless.
Thanks for publishing it. |
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Woohoo! I'm happy! You've just made my day. Now I'm ready to endure a long day of school. Only about 8 days til grad nite, so it's not so bad... |
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spaz141Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/05/04
Very cute story. I liked it. Thanks a bunch. Ten words can be hard sometimes. |
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That was wonderful, Kalie! I'm glad you decided to type it and post it.
I liked it because it was a very realistic protrayal of the characters. The dialogues and feelings are well displayed and expressed, and the flow of the story is right.
And the ending paragraph is perfect |
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That was absolutely lovely. At this point, I think it will be a crime to ramble.
So ... thank you for this.
gil |
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crookshankUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/05/04
I think Id try and get a copy of this saved on to my hard disk since there is no way JKR would write anyhting this good between our favorite couple.
Simple yet emotinally effective in conveying the sentiments of prevailing time. Exactly what everyone would picture it between Harry and Hermione right after that debacle in the DOM. (no pun intended ;-) ) |
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ForestSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/05/04
The mood upon the household was somber, for lack of a better word.
How about caliginous?
caliginous: dim, dark, misty, and gloomy; affected with darkness or dimness; murky, obscure. |
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JulianUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/05/04
Unfortunately, starkers in Britspeak is slang for being totally naked.
But otherwise, not bad. |
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MuirninSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/05/04
This was very good... I adore short fluffy pieces that have a bit of angst in them as well...
This one seemed very honest and realistic... Thank you for a wonderful piece... |
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SashaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/05/04
Very good, a well written story that captured quite accurately how I perceive Harry will be feeling in Book 6. |
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KypDurronSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/05/04
 Excellent. I love aggressive Mione. Especially when Harry's too hesitant to act on his feelings. |
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megUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/05/04
yay!! go hermione! this fic was great! you described everything really well! |
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That was a sweet story. too bad you arent continuing it, but thats a good place to stop. |
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aww that was good. good job.... loved it! so sad, but so happy as well. Harry needs hermione. i hope jkr feels the same way.... |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/05/04
SWEET!!! okay, I dont want to see some bad break up or hatred, I dont care if its sappy, I want to see a happy Harry and Hermione... PLEASE |
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