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Breaking Point

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Nitya
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/05/04
Wow. Just wow. I love your writing, Kalie - it's really powerful. Their emoticons are exactly how I imagine they'd feel after OOTP. Actually, after everything that's happened.

And the ending? Priceless.

Thanks for publishing it.
 

RickyElRey
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/05/04
Woohoo! I'm happy! You've just made my day. Now I'm ready to endure a long day of school. Only about 8 days til grad nite, so it's not so bad...
 

spaz141
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/05/04
Very cute story. I liked it. Thanks a bunch. Ten words can be hard sometimes.
 

Angel-Wing
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/05/04
That was wonderful, Kalie! I'm glad you decided to type it and post it.

I liked it because it was a very realistic protrayal of the characters. The dialogues and feelings are well displayed and expressed, and the flow of the story is right.

And the ending paragraph is perfect
 

romulus lupin
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/05/04


That was absolutely lovely. At this point, I think it will be a crime to ramble.

So ... thank you for this.

gil
 

crookshank
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/05/04
I think Id try and get a copy of this saved on to my hard disk since there is no way JKR would write anyhting this good between our favorite couple.

Simple yet emotinally effective in conveying the sentiments of prevailing time. Exactly what everyone would picture it between Harry and Hermione right after that debacle in the DOM. (no pun intended ;-) )
 

Forest
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/05/04
The mood upon the household was somber, for lack of a better word.

How about caliginous?

caliginous: dim, dark, misty, and gloomy; affected with darkness or dimness; murky, obscure.
 

Julian
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/05/04
Unfortunately, starkers in Britspeak is slang for being totally naked.

But otherwise, not bad.
 

Muirnin
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/05/04
This was very good... I adore short fluffy pieces that have a bit of angst in them as well...

This one seemed very honest and realistic... Thank you for a wonderful piece...
 

Sasha
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/05/04
Very good, a well written story that captured quite accurately how I perceive Harry will be feeling in Book 6.
 

KypDurron
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/05/04
Excellent. I love aggressive Mione. Especially when Harry's too hesitant to act on his feelings.
 

meg
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/05/04
yay!! go hermione! this fic was great! you described everything really well!
 

Austenlover
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/05/04
That was a sweet story. too bad you arent continuing it, but thats a good place to stop.
 

akjennymay9
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/05/04
aww that was good. good job.... loved it! so sad, but so happy as well. Harry needs hermione. i hope jkr feels the same way....
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/05/04
SWEET!!! okay, I dont want to see some bad break up or hatred, I dont care if its sappy, I want to see a happy Harry and Hermione... PLEASE
 

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