Excellent story! I like that they got together in a very viable way, which makes it different from other stories i've read recently, moreover it is sweet and charming. I enjoy it a lot

That had so many gramatical errors it was not funny.
But, I overlooked them because, this is the best angsty fic ive ever read!! I loved it. I just couldn't stop reading it. I thought it was very well written and structured, and there was only minor gramatical errors, ( I just used the first line to shock you haha state the obvious ) but who cares. It was so fantastic. Please write more! :

I liked the story, but you need to run a spell check for simple things like spelling chin, "chine", etc.

Very absorbing story. Really well written.
I especially liked the scene with the door... with the two of them on different sides...

-Nadja

awwww!!! That was so sweet! *grabs a few tissues* gotta love the fluff! Great job!

Court~

You're a wonderful author, Kalie! Keep up the good work...and when you decide to do novel-length work, you can bet I'll read it!

Cute...I just love a good story with fluff. Love the fluff...Love H/Hr.

Very good short story. At first, I wasn't inclined to believe it, but everything definitely worked in the end, except for maybe the last two paragraphs--they seem too forced. But aside from that, an excellent one-shot and a great read!

And of course this story found its way here.
http://www.portkey.org/recs/myrec.php?view=

I wonder what Nitya means by this:
Also, ignore what the author says about the story.

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*reads Rec thread* Oh I see!

This is really cute, and sweet!! I loved that part, where Hermione said, “Because you can’t help but go out of your way for the one you love.”..and then repeated it, i thought that was really sweet..Lolz..Awesome fic!!

Awwwwww, that was so sweet Kalie!!
Great job. Lol, I'm getting a good picture in my mind on Harry's face!

Lovely. I like the way you described their changing feelings throughout the fic. Also, liked the ending very much.

Good work, Kalie!

Whoa. Really, whoa. This was excellent and it really displayed both Harry and Hermione's feelings well. Kalie, you've taken me on an emotional roller coaster, and I love roller coasters. Bravo!

omg! great job! very very very sweet. i wish i was hermione, oh how I wish....

You know when you have one of those absolutely horrible days, where everything from your shoelace being untied to a math test to your friends goes comepletely wrong? And then the morning after, you think to yourself, "oh joy, another round..." Well, Kalie, this ficcie made the next round actually pleasant