That's like the scene from a Mid-Summers Night Dream, where Hermia (im not joking on the name...) and...i forget if it was lysander or demetrius...anyways...Hermia and one of the two boys run away to get some privacy (more to elope than anything really) and the other boy follows them to see whats going on and to try to stop them because he is "in love" with Hermia...but he in turn in followed by Helena...So Hermia= Hermione the boy who runs away w/ her=Harry...the other boy=Ron...and Luna of course is Helena...lovely...confusing...but lovely either way...did you get the plot from the play?
MoonChild

oh i loved it! it was so sweet..kind of scared me there for a second with the whole brother/sister thing. ugh can u imagine harry and hermione brother and sister? kill me now!

but it was an awesome story! i loved it! awesome job!

Wow...I...that was great! When Hermione said that she and Harry were...well...I was floored even though I knew it wasn't true. This was a truely great fic! And the end...what more could we readers want?

i really liked this story. it was very sweet. well, the Harry and Hermione part. Ron is the usual blockhead. great stuff.

Wow. Once again, I am floored by the way you weave your stories. Fantastic character interaction, absolutely nothing short of brilliant. Most excellent word choice, as always. Sheer chemistry, bits of dry humour...I swear, the whole scene with the tripe had me convulsing with a fit of the giggles (most particularly when Hermione revealed she loathed that nasty, nasty dish). Hee. Stunning, breath-taking and all that jazz.

*dies laughing on the floor*

*resurrects*

Oh man, for a moment I thought you'd watched far, far too much Star Wars. That was...hilarious! And the mush afterwards was just . Great job. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Once again: absolutely outstanding! The best part is that I can actually imagine this happening in the books!

great one shot... i loved how hermione got ron off her back... i must admit i was a little confused at first... but it worked out in the end... let me know when you have another story up and running...

candice

okay... The fact that Hermione would say something like being harry's sister is ccompletely ridiculous and this whole thing is a bit cliché, i gues it isn't to bad.

Wow! You've just made my day! I heard of this infamous Sibling theory before, and I still think it's a bit far-fetched. Great fic! Well, might as well check out JK's site.

Awesome as always, Lauren...you know you rock As usual, you are a master writer of emotions. Oh, and great title for this fic, hee.

Had me going. Thought it was going to be like Luke and Princess Leia for a minute! Good ficlet.

I love you, I love you, I love you! You are my favourite fic-writer on portkey! This one-shot was so cute... I loved it...

The "he's my brother" thing is a bit weak (actually, is has been explored to death in countless AU fics), as Hermione is sure to be able to come up with something more plausible, and it's hard to imagine Ron and Harry swallow it so easily, too. Apart from this, however, this is a pretty story and the fights are simply a beauty! Nice of you to send Luna to Ron exactly at the right time.

there is H/Hr hints there? YAY!!! FINALLY CONFORMATION!!!

and I was thinking while reading your fic when you said they were brother and sister...well i was thinking that incest is just wrong and NEVER pair them as brother and sister...it would be like EWWW

but anyway, I loved it all the same Please post more stories soon!

Jenna Kat