Really interesting choice of lines. Loved how harry said he could kill here with his bare hands and how hermione could poisin him with her lips. Really interesting. By the way my name is Emma.

nice one specially the part were she told him'if your hands can kill me then my lips will poison you'

REALLY REALLY GOOD! yay! im adding this to my favorites list!!!

i like the emotion and mood in this. the descriptions at the beginning were beautiful. a really nice piece of writing.

I love all of your stories, but YOU NEVER FINISH THEM! you just leave the rest to our imaginations.....think of the poor souls like me who can't!!

Wow! Dark and intense--very passionate *fans self* You are some writer!

“I can’t love you,” he murmured shakily.
They both knew he was lying. Her fingers trailed against his lips. “I’m not asking you to.”

I love that she doesn't ask more of him than he's capable of giving - despite what he may or may not admit to himself. That's what makes them so great together - she just 'gets' him in a way no other character seems to.

Finely penned once again dear scribe!

That was very deep and very beautiful. I liked it a lot. I've tried writing many times and each time i try to get my words to sound lovely and poetic, just like you did. You did it wonderfully! I'd definatly be interested to read more. Great job! I don't usually review either, but this was marvelous!

Very poetic and satisfying. It grips you from the beginning and leaves you hungry to find out what fate awaits these lovers. Thank you for a good read, perhaps another chapter??

wow! this is so beautiful, i just dont see how its rated R but other than that i printed this story out and stuck it in my binder..im always reading it. i love it! i can read it over and over and it never fails to make me sad, and happy.

I absoulutly love this, i had read it countless times and I still love it. It's sooo beautiful, like most of your writing! i love it!!!!

I absoulutly love this, i had read it countless times and I still love it. It's sooo beautiful, like most of your writing! i love it!!!!

Wow. This was absolutely marvelous. I actually think Harry is going to behave like this on the Sixth book... the boy has some serious issues to work out... Let's just hope Hermione can be there for him... preferably under a wool blanket.

OMG!!! That was Beautifully written. i loved the deepness of it...you really captured something strong between thats always there. i love this story!

That was a pretty good story. I think that you certainly could add more to it, but that's only my oppinion, and my oppinion never mattered much to anyone...