I really loved your story. Too bad J.K. Rowling won't put something like this in her own books!

awesome you just need more intimate scenes. Snogging, More of mr.granger talking to harry and ron leaving Harry and Hermoine alone!!

Dear Hermione,
You Need to Kiss Harry Potter?
I Love You, Hermione.
Kiss Me, Please.
Thanks

Good story but Harry should be replaced with Ron. Ron and Hermione make a way better couple, look at all the evidence!

not bad. But when are you going to explain why this story is called 'the avatars of atlantis'? The story is four chapters long, and I don't really see anything related to that( the time vortex charms probaly are, but at the moment I can do notting but gues over that). And what's going on with Ron? he acts strange.

I am very impressed by your story so far. I have enjoyed each chapter. I hope this isn't taken in the wrong way, but I would also like to mention that I feel you are getting better as you go along. Not that it wasn't good at the start, but that I notice definite improvement in style and in character interaction with each new addition to your work. I look forward to reading this story in its entirety. Keep up the good work and my congratulations for what you've done so far.

^_^ keep ging, it's getting good!!! i love the fact that ron is... erm.. was taking it so well. MINI MCGONAGALL!! ^_^

it is good i am amazed at the quality of the book

More action that's awesome!
I think that I might be going to the Harry Hermione side of the gossip!

Very good, indeed there is finally some action with some worthwhile people!

Dear Clavin (if that is who wrote this),
I must say, this really does sound like JK would write. It's her style, the way she words things; you must be a really big fan. Anyway, I think Harry cold very well develop feelings for Hermione, but I really want Ron and Hermione together.

the story is absooutley brilliant!! Is there any chance of it being finsihed, as i would love to see where this all leads!

wow, i love it! i can't wait until u update again!! hope it's soon, hint hint wink wink

What has this to do with atlantis? I hope that part of the story is starting soon, since I already have enough of al the Harry/Hermione fluffyness. That part is a bit to fast, and I don't really like break-up-make-up story's, and considdered that that is the only real thing(except turning this in pornography, wich I doubt you will do) you can do with the story abouth the relationship, it will be that way...
This isn't going to be great if you cancentrate to much on that storyline.

And where exactly do you get the name of your chapters? Introducings in the story? That is going to be verry hard in the later chapters.

And then there is the ending AN. Why do you always end with exactly the same stuff. At least rewrite it a bit, tat way it would be a litle bit more interesting.

And the fact hermione know how to repair a toilet. She likes to learn ,but I really doubt she would learn somethin like that. Is that maybe humour?
And the clumsyness of tonks? That is far more than in the books. Maybe you consider that as humour? I really don't.

And the fact they depart at broad daylight. I know you give an explanation, but they could have eassily been spotted by some mugles. But at least hermione knows how to fly in this fic.

I know I complain much, and a lot abouth the previous chapters, but I needed to say al of this. considder it as advice to help you get better(of course, that is the basic use of a review)

lo.l sooo funnym i love this story damn cliffie update sson