really nice comic way of showing H/Hr relationship but the thing I'm most awaiting for in a H/Hr story hasn't yet been found. One in where Harry loves her before and Hermione doesnt realize it after some while

I liked that story a lot! It was really good! I have to read another one of your stories!

very nice fic Lots of angst and fluff wrapped into a neat little package KUDOS TO YOU!

*points at last review, #108176*

That last one was from me, btw.

One of the things I did like about this story is that it shows the transition in Harry's feelings for Hermione.

Now what was Lovesong's lyrics again? Isn't that the one that goes
However far away, I will always love you
However long I'll stay, I will always love you
Whatever words you'll say, I will always love you
My memory could be rusty, though. Must look up that song sometime.

And I see you used another Cure song, "Boys Don't Cry". Maybe you can borrow "Just Like Heaven" too, that's my favorite from The Cure.

Atta boy, indeed!

Overall, this is a good story. Some parts were drawn out too much, though. It also takes much practice and skill to write dialogues that really sound like they're spoken by different people. The dialogue in this story is far from bad, but it hasn't quite reached that other level either.

Hi, this was recommended here:
http://talk.portkey.org/index.php?showtopic=7751

"Lovesong" by The Cure, eh? I haven't heard that in years.

This was absolutely adorable! I loved Ron and Hermione's argument over reading at the table and I was laughing at how the books attacked them. And then their declaration of love was just so sweeet!!

Great job!

I think this is a beautiful and touchg story. Harry thinking he took Hermione for granted is really good. It makes Harry realzie his real true feelings toward her and that made them admit their feelings to each other. I think that the Lavender and Ron thing at the end was very cute.

I like it! My kind of story, where it is Harry who was having some internal conflicts with himself about his feelings for Hermione. I'll be waiting for the next chapter!

how sweet, how romantic, getting hit with a rogue book

Very, very sweet. It was really cute. I just love your stories - they make me feel all warm and fuzzy inside, even after a long, hard day of testing ... *groans* ... I'm worn out. This was just the ticket, let me tell you. *giggles*

-Lauren

Aw, that was sweet. And good choice for the inspiration, Robert Smith is a fantastic lyricist.

awwww that was sooo cute !! it was very in-character too. great job