sweet nice and short, i liked this, i now wish it was longer

sweet nice and short, i liked this, i now wish it was longer

This *is* nice. Suitable conclusion/follow-up to the frenzy of his reaction to Dolohov's cursing her in DoM battle. Very nice. Luckily she doesn't know here what's going to happen to her in a few short months in HBP! :-(

hi... i like your stories and your writing style. everything is so intense! i read whispers, and i think that is my favourite. i didn't like hues so much, as i would rather read about a jealous harry than a jealous hermione. maybe for your next story you could do something like that? there are not enough good stories like that out there!

Missing scenes can be the coolest!

I wonder why there wasn't more exposition about his feelings on almost losing Hermione in the book - of course, the book was about the size of the OED...

I think I'm becoming addicted to your ficlets - it's like fic candy! Chiclets - Ficlets, except these are more satisfying than the 30 seconds of flavor you get out of a wad of chiclets.

I hope you're right, btw. I hope that this proves to be the turning point in the H/Hr relationship in canon.

so this story was the night of the night sirius died and when all when to the department, the endind was nice.

Aww. This was beautiful. *tear* I have said all that I can now.

Short, simple, but sweet and full of emotion. I loved it. Great job.

bloody brill dude oh all to cuties more more more of thems pleeeeeease!

wow. this one was great! very very good. i always wondered what would happen when hermione woke up after the DOM, and saw harry again. the way you wrote it, is how i could see her writing it, if only she favored harry and hermione, and not hermione and ron

I love this story. It was very interesting. I love one-shots like this that make you want more to the story. One thing I noticed and I'm not saying this to be mean but it kind of switched from past tense at the beginning (ie. he murmured) to present tense (ie. he hisses) I was always taught to stay with one tense because if you don't it makes the story confusing. But I really did like it..so don't get mad..just constructive criticism

Really good! I don't really understand the title tough... But great work!!!!

how sad yet how sweet at the same time, the pain Harry goes through is well written

Is this a case of the "corruptor" getting corrupted? It is such a beautiful, touching, wonderful work of fluff ...

(Ducks Kaze's hand)

Not really (fluff wise )... but it is still a wonderful, deeply felt and touchingly tender work of art.

I love it.

gil

great job! raelly liked that. i thouhg it was kind of odd jkr dealt with harry loosing sirrius and hermione almost dieing. she didn't really let any of it sink in, kind of odd. oh well... good job!!!