Hermione has the power and control? Hum, I dont think so...at least not in this one hehehe

That was VERY interesting... I like it. WOW!!! VERY HOT!!!

keep it up
-megz-

Brilliant! I've actually read most of your fics on portkey, and I must say that I am rather impressed. You are very talented!

im going to apoligize ahead of time for everything im about to say 'SORRY'.OK. i liked the story,even though i thought it was lousy, my favorite part was the fact that it took place at a dance club.so sexy!

This is incredibly sexy. All the imagery pops, the lyrics used just fit, and the lust and the love is just all tangled up perfectly.

I love this story. I don't know why, maybe because it shows a slightly darker side to a Harry & Hermione relationship, it contains all my favorite things in a well written form. Especially the drinking, the dancing and the sexual tension. I admire your work. Kudos.

I might write a fic called Wicked that sort of has do with the book Wicked but not really just a plot sort of like it.

Argh, so hot! i loved it, I belive i speak for so many HP fans have, we have a curious longing for what would happen in the adult lives of wicked and daring H and HR. their endevers and innocence currently expressed by JK create a naughty sexyness with such potential that set up stoies like this which i am sure feeds that curios longing oh so well. A wonderful story the only downfall however being that it is a one shot. Nudge Nudge!!!

hermione was truly wicked dancing with another partner to get harry on the dance floor, great story

Very sexy dancing scene. NIN was definitely a good choice for that moment.

Strange but ok. i think that you could add more to this. but that's only my oppinion and my oppinion never mattered much to anyone...

wow. interesting. you descirbed the bar scene so well, i could envision it. the sweat, the crowd, the loud booming music. very good. very different. i love stories that aren't what your used to, and make you think of things you've never thought of before.

the club idea is great! i like to see them out having fun! good job!

Excellent - nothing like a story that leaves A LOT to the imagination - the explicit can be so boring at times.

I'm on a kick and reading all of your story. I also reviewed Thieves about a minute aho. This story is very good too. It's amazing that you were able to use a Nine Inch Nails song, who I despise as a band, to fit into the story here. It was very respectable and amazing. I'd never be able to do that. Maybe light fluffy love songs, but not NIN. Good Job!