This is a most excellent story. Your grammar and spelling are very developed, and your plot flows smoothly. Overall, this one-shot deserves a good review.

Nice very nice. I give it 8.5 on a scale of 1-10. Very good indeed. Now on to the next one.

I like that, its very cute a sweet, I am truely amuzed by the fact that they both thought the other was going to say no to their question/statement. I also love that Ron told her to tell him she loves him already. It shows that Ron isn't as dence as most people make him out to be, I think I actually said that same thing to you in my last review... anywya wonderful job as per usual!!

Beautiful story. Ever so sad and peaceful at the same time. It was a very sweet ficlet. You did an amzing job, just like with all your other stories. Bunches of thumbs up (I only have 2, but I'll be sure to get more just for you ) flying your way!

Congratulations on another 2 O'clock AM stories but and I strongly encourage you to keep writing!

I congratulate you on your excellent stories. I am most amazed by your ability to keep the story in the second-person POV, something that many authors try, yet fail miserably at! Write more soon.

That was really lovely and I really enjoyed it, a sequal would be very much appreciated.
Bye.

that was so sweet, i love it! really sweet that's all i can say.

As usual, a nice and fluffy story written by you. Keep up the good work!

hee hee! so sweeeeeeeet! aaawwwwwwww, im smiling from ear to ear. well done

oh that was awesome!! i loved it !! it was so sweet! i think that your really good at ficlets and u wrote this at 2 in the morning abpsolutelt awesome!

Absolutley wonderful. Thank you for taking the time to write this

Aww! Je l'aime! (I love it!)

You should make a sequel. It would be very much enjoyed. Very very good test run.

ahhhhhh....how sweet was that?!!!!! Great 1st time on a one shot. I just love h/hr fluff!!! Makes me all fuzzy....

Very very sweet, i completely understand why Harry asked her to marry him, he has never known love before, and now that it is in front of him he wants it to be complete and final, he has to have a solid evidence that someone really loves him enough to marry him, so i totally understand it.

Very good, you COULD make a sequel, i think many readers would love to read about the wedding, i myself are content in this very nice one shot

3 thumbs up!

I loved it I have a lump in my throat