nice one! but i'd like to know why Draco didnt call Ginny by her name..

I LOVE IT. very sweet. you are a very talented author.

this was really good and romantic. like it seems innocent.a good way to think about the start of thier relationship. you should think about adding a few more chapters!

What a refreshing little story. I really liked what you did with the characters, and I loved the feel of the whole thing. Great writing. It really invoked a lot of emotion. And I don't think it was too terribly OOC...just a side of Draco we don't see from Harry's POV, perhaps? Anyway, I liked it.

Thanks for posting this. I'm not a huge D/G person, but I'm working on a story that's D/G and I needed a bit of an insight on how other people portray them. I liked a lot of lines in this, but for some reason this one stuck out the most to me: "To his irritation, his voice wasn't as harsh as he had meant it to be." Great description of his feelings.

Anyway, I really enjoyed it, and thanks again for sharing.

Your descriptions are poetic. Usually, the fluff-stuff is OOC with Draco, but I could see him up there brooding and unafraid to be himself. Your summary is an apt description, it was very sensual w/o being smut- all in all very enjoyable.

He was only a little OC, just the fact that he was so accepting of his feelings for her. But a good piece of D/G fluff! That's rare. Any chance on continuing this?

Such a cute story. I really liked it. You wrote it so well I didn't even miss the smut, because it wouldn't have fit in anyway. Keep up the good work.

Very good. The story stays true to character, while digging a bit beyond the veneers generally displayed by the characters. Good use of descriptive language . . .this scene was vividly alive.

This was very well done. I adore the style and the descriptions-- furious snogging in the first line, the cold Malfoy manor, the way his calloused hand felt on smooth skin... beautiful. It's part of what I have trouble with, and seeing such great descriptions is a great inspiration. I liked the peacefulness of the ending, quite powerful.

Very well written. I like that they didn't immediately jump into a smut-filled encounter. It was very innocent and very, very nice.

Thank you.

lol

Awww, That was sooo pretty! Despite all the infuriating rivalry between the 2 families, I think that Draco and Ginny would be such a cute couple. Wait! Did I just say THAT???? I'm a Malfoy hater;not a Malfoy liker! Oh well,you made him seem soo nice in this fic! GOO YOOUUU!

OMG!!! Please for the love of all that's holy, as well as my sanity, tell me you're going to be doing a sequel of some kind. Maybe were they get together. This was very good! I loved it. It was not that OOC. I think that if Draco was interested or in love with someone, that particular person could probably bring out his softer side. That's not to say he's be as nice to everyone else however. I am crossing my fingers and HOPING and PRAYING you do a sequel. I really like your style of writing and will have to see if you have other stuff posted on here. If you don't but have some posted elsewhere, please let me know where. Thanks hun. This was FANTASTIC by the way in case you couldn't tell.

i was sad b/c you had said 'not smut' but i had no reason to be upset!! this was beautiful! i fell in love with draco all over again!

so cute.