I have just started reading this story and i m simply loving it. Thumbs up for u

this really is the best fic ive ever read on portkey!

So far you story is pretty good. I know that your story is finished, so that doesn\'t matter at this point. However, I do wish to say one thing... WTF?!? The adults knew that Ron was possessed by something, and thus would most likely have some of its skills and knowledge. Yet, they still sent Harry to fight the demon without even telling him, and not only that, forbidding the use of a wand. In other words, they put Harry against an unknown and possibly strong enemy without his knowledge while taking away the things that give Harry the greatest chance of winning. I don\'t care how manipulative Dumbledore is, I doubt Mr Weasely would do that to Harry, considering he is almost like family to them. And if you ignore that fact, Mr. Weasely wouldn\'t put Harry at a disadvantage like that if he truly believed that Harry was going to free his son. Finally, why did neither Harry or Hermione show any anger or frustration about this? Harry through a major temper tantrum when he found out that Dumbledore had manipulated and hid the truth regarding the prophecy from him. Both Harry and Hermione got angry when the adults tried to force them into fighting Ron. So why didn\'t they get angry when they found out that there lives were once again manipulated and put in greater danger because the truth was hidden?

Great job! I like this story so much. Thank you for writing.

Loved the story, but I can't find the sequel. I heard it was called Hermione Granger and Fate's Divergence. Is it my computer or did you delete that story?

Well! I rather took umbrage at your slight against the English. You may do well to remember that, other than Japan, America has never gone to war as a direct consequence of an attack. You may think you won the 2nd world war, but in fact, you would have sat and watched us crumble along with the rest of Europe if it hadn't have been for Pearl Harbour. The Japanese were allies of Germany and vise versa so by entering into war against Japan you were, by default, automatically at war with Germany. It was not by choice or from the fact that your nation felt you had to help us to save Europe. History, of which we have years and years, teaches some amazing facts if you ever bothered to look.

Vietnam was a war of choice which your Govt. chose to wage and, in so doing, slaughtered the cream of your youth. You also lost it by the way. We, the British, having paid heed to historical lessons, gave it a rather wide body swerve.

The aid you gave us whilst we had our backs to wall was for extreme profit and actually took the British nation years to repay along with the interest your Govt. charged us.

You may do well to realize that the story you are writing is the brainchild of a Brit, too, as is most of the worlds best literature.

Your remark, that I percieved to be a dig against British accents, had me rather puzzled. It is the original and correct way to use the language, not, the Americanese you use.

I read American articles/stories sometimes and actually shudder that you have the gall to call your language English.

Your editing skills, by the way, are abysmal...Rick in England

Great story.... A bit saddened with the fact you involved in many occasions God... I always thought of the Potter universum as something free of religion... Anyhow... what happens now? Is there a sequel?

I'm not really a fan of this chapter. Your fight with weapons did not make sense.
I know how to fight with a katana, I have taken lessons in it for 5 years now along with 12 years of karata.
Against someone with a weighted weapon, like a ax. You simply jump out of the way and counter by slashing your sword in thir side or neck. They can't do anything about it because while their is a lot of power behind the blow of an ax, you can't stop the weapon in mid air and turn it. It's to heavy for it to go inmediatly from an attack to defense.

You really are an arrogant American aren't you? Mind you, your story isn't bad but the way your speaking about how great the Americans are. Well I suggest you reread History.

Most of the wars you Americans have been in, was because of your own arrogance. Vietnam. You had no reason to be there. The people didn't even want the Americans there. The Vietcong was supported by the people you were supposed to save.
Irak? It bloody well showed how many nuclear weapons there were hugh? In fact there is only one country that has ever used nuclear weapons namely the USA.
Which brings us to the war against japan which you were in fact losing.

Eisenhower didn't do squad during the second world war. He was the highest commander, basicly he sits there on his ass while other commanders think of the tactics and the soldier in the field does them.

But even that doesn't mean squad about having seen terror. You nationality doesn't make you have experience. My grandfather was in the second world war. He was send three time to the concentration camps and he escaped three times. In the last one, even though they were to execute him he was first tortured for information. Basicly they cut of his hand piece by piece. I don't think there are many persons who have seen more terror then he has. So I can say I am related to him but does that give me the right to say I've seen terror. Hell no. I haven't seen any terror. The closest I came to it was a tourist visit to Aushwitz. And personly, I think neither have you. Otherwise you wouldn't talk that way.

i have several things to comment on: 1) Nice use of quotes and Tombstone 2) You really should consider continueing this sometime 3) there were some mistakes throughout the story but for the most part it was well written. I really like Strength of the World so far too.

Even if it is beautiful and sweet, i think that they are too open, teenager will speak so mutch and so deeply ?
Bye

i loved it! wierd ending though... what happened to Hermione? will they be together again? does this have a sequel? please tell me!!!

sorry about the questions... i really loved it!!! hope to read more of your stories!

where is the rest of the story oh comeon dont end this great fanfic like this i am really disappointed please add some chapters add some epilogue to this story for us please give this fanfiction the ending it deserves please
thats all i can say rest is on you
good bye
regards
haroon

WHAT!?! Thats It?? Come on I want to know what happens next!

spelling mistakes like this one.

“I've good(souldn't this be got ?) a master's in psychology if you ever want to talk about it Hermione.” With this he left them alone once more.