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This story was wonderful, very fluffy, with a wonderfully placed douse of smut.
keep writing more masterpieces, though small errors were notable they were minuscule in size, and confusion they created.
a beta would do a miraculous job at removing them.
(i would but, I'm too busy, though 'perfect imagination' has wonderful people that would do a wonderful job!)
Again, awesome job.
Charlee Toombs |
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ShennaUnsigned | Chapter : 19 | Date : 09/08/07
Hey I have to say I love your entire story, there was as you know a coupla errors...like using a word bellows instead of billows, but you've already stated you know this and intend to use beta readers so *shrugs*. Anyway everything else was lovely....and I am very pleased that I didn't have to wait for any part of the story. I have a problem with reading too fast. Anyway only thing I DESPERATELY need to know is what happened to the poor tarantula?!? If it did imprint on Ron and he's terrified of spiders well I really feel badly for the poor thing, and this is coming from the girl that hates spiders....I really feel like you should write a story explaining with a happy ending for the spider or...make it so the spider didn't see Ron or anybody you know the two way mirrors they use in police stations...being without a mother is horrible!!!! *twitches, still recovering from an anime, Fruits Baskets, where they kids mother rejects him....cries* Other than that WAY TO GO!! I will be watching your corner from now on....though the wait may kill me.
Also I think it would be cool to have a story where Ginny gets a pet spider from someone...hehe so there will be a mention of you when I do it since you gave me the idea. Thanks for an intertaining read! HUGS Shenna |
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ShennaUnsigned | Chapter : 19 | Date : 09/08/07
Hey I have to say I love your entire story, there was as you know a coupla errors...like using a word bellows instead of billows, but you've already stated you know this and intend to use beta readers so *shrugs*. Anyway everything else was lovely....and I am very pleased that I didn't have to wait for any part of the story. I have a problem with reading too fast. Anyway only thing I DESPERATELY need to know is what happened to the poor tarantula?!? If it did imprint on Ron and he's terrified of spiders well I really feel badly for the poor thing, and this is coming from the girl that hates spiders....I really feel like you should write a story explaining with a happy ending for the spider or...make it so the spider didn't see Ron or anybody you know the two way mirrors they use in police stations...being without a mother is horrible!!!! *twitches, still recovering from an anime, Fruits Baskets, where they kids mother rejects him....cries* Other than that WAY TO GO!! I will be watching your corner from now on....though the wait may kill me.
Also I think it would be cool to have a story where Ginny gets a pet spider from someone...hehe so there will be a mention of you when I do it since you gave me the idea. Thanks for an intertaining read! HUGS Shenna |
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This isn't the prequel to The Secrets of War is it? I really liked this story and I plan on reading much much more of your writing. I think you're great! Keep up all the good work and keep those chapters for the Secrets of War coming! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 11 | Date : 19/06/07
HER NAME IS GINEVRA, YES GINEVRA NOT VIRGINIA!!!!!!!! JK ROWLING SAID IT HERSELF!!!!!! sorry im just really annoyed lol |
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Ha ha, i did indeed like the ending! Draco reminds me of Sebastian from Cruel Intentions. right off to the next chapter... |
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mmm, interesting idea and well written. Like the interaction between Draco and Ginny, very in character. Shall be very interesting to see how harry takes a fall on D/G relationship! Right am off to read more! |
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It was. I'm still loving it! and since I've reviewed oh so very much, I think I should get at least ten minutes with him. |
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I do! I do! haha it is really funny and really good-like I said before but oh well, I'll probably say it again. |
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It is very good, and very funny. So far I like it alot. |
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mypetSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 17/02/07
Poor Draco... he's going to wait for a little favors, but I hope it won't be so long... and won't be with another girl... I luv yor story |
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mypetSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/02/07
Wow!!! this champter is really cool. I didn't think Ginny could have it in her... who I'm kidding you're right she's very strong... & Draco, oh my god!!! Draco is... Draco. Ilove it |
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW THAT WAS THE PERFECT ENDING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it's so sweet it's perfect absolutly perfect!!!!!!! i'm gonna go read your other stories! if they're as good as this one... well... i'm so gonna have a fun time reeeeading them |
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OMG! the doves are such a romantic thing awww i would love to be his girlfriend right now...ginny's lucky |
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Yayy! the chapter was awsome!! i really loved it! it's good that ginny and draco got things setteled between them |
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