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chelley83
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/11/07
great story, i know i've read it before but i wanted to add it to my favorites so i needed to write a review...sorry if i've wrote one before...anyways the story was great and it definitely made me laugh, smile and cry (a little) anyways thanks for writing it
 

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canadianmegz
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/04/06
I was surprised at the way Ron acted to her and I'm happy that it all worked out.
you're a wonderful author. you have a wonderful gift
keep it up
-megz-
 

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meagan
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/07/03
this is great! this shows a more realistic reaction out of ron. you really captured his character. bravo!
 

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Kris
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/07/03
Great story! Loved the ending
 

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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/06/03
that went way to fast.
 

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XhaLe
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/06/03
The scene where they admit their love to each other is a little trite...



And that confrontation scene with Ron is awfulawfulawful.



Apart from those scenes this story is at least a 10. With the one scen it's at least a nine. With the Ron characterization I can't give it more than a 8.



I -like- the Ron in the books. I'm a die-hard H/Hr shipper. There's no reason to write a Ron like that. The we're-still-friends scene later in Hr's bedroom doesn't take into account several of the comments that Ron made - what he said doesn't jive with the reasons he later gives for saying them.
 

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Alastar
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/05/03
Marvelius, excelente. This is indeed a heart-felt story. I loved it.
 

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Great Marauder
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/04/03
So cool. Love it. Wih you write more such fics.



Cheers!
 

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lordanhur
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/03/03
great i really liked it it was really heart felt
 

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Pearl Drop Angel
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/02/03
In character and realistic. Also well written. Keep it up.
 

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Damien666
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/02/03
Even I, Satans son liked it!
 

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Ashleigh and Amber
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/02/03
aww this story was so sweet..i think jk rowling definately needs to put this is the last book..great job!
 

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jacy
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/02/03
AAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWEEEEEEEE!!!! I LOVED the ending! That was GREAT!!! This is DEFINATELY going on my favorites list
 

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Twilight
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/02/03
Incredible!



Definitely one of the best H/H fanfics I've read so far. I can't find anything wrong with this piece (although Ron's outburst about not even liking Hermione as a friend did seem a tad odd), so I'll leave this review with sincere praising of your works.
 

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Thelvyn
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/02/03
A really nice and well written fic. It's definitely one of my favorite fics. I hope you plan to write some more happy fics
 

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