Brillant!

Great story, why'd you stop writing?

This is sooooo good! Update soon!!

update soon!

Hey Quis, Where are you? Why too long to update? I think your story is great.Please, don´t leave us waiting.

hi! this storyline is really cool. keep going with it. about that request for an idea. maybe they could go to one of those clubs that are for teenagers. or something like that. anyways, yeah, keep going with this story.

*sniff* Update?

please update soon! it's been so long!

hey!!

lovely story!!

i just almost kill u when i read the "This isn’t really a chapter" thing.

please finish it!!!!



Lina

ROTFL I can't breathe...oh lord this has got to be one of the most fantastic things I have ever read! You absolutely MUST finish this!!!! PLEASE!! Look at this...I'm laughing so hard that I'm crying. I have no idea what you could possibly hope to improve. great character interaction! Plot is just completely unique! More por favor!



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so far so good i like it



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I figure I can review my own fic, right? Every time I read it I have a different opinion on how I did, I'm glad you all seem to be enjoying it. To comment on Jenna's review; I know I'm not leaving many of you guessing, it's the way I write. I'm doing this to have fun, not really to leave you all on the edge of your seats. I am however learning from everyone's reviews and have adjusted my style a little to fit your comments. Thanks everybody!

really sweet. i can't wait for the next chapter. good idea.

Yet another good chapter. How long until you come up with more? (if ther will be more!) You're not that bad a writer. a few spelling mistakes, but no one is perfect. looking forwar to reading more of your work. see ya!