dennisudSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 01/09/08
That was a hard chapter to read not only having Jerk...Um Jack propose but Harry's heart breaking and Hermione being the dense one here.
Them sleeping in the same bed doesn't make things better too!
Ok angst till a few more chapters right?
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SaraUnsigned | Chapter : 22 | Date : 01/01/08
This was a great story. I really enjoyed it. You are a great writer. |
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AphySigned | Chapter : 22 | Date : 13/12/07
Not much of a post-hogwarts FF fan, but I have to say, that was so amazingly cute. It was an absolute pleasure to read! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 22 | Date : 13/08/07
I LOOKING FOR CHAP: 23-26 ON YOU DON'T KNOW ME.
THANKS |
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RosalindUnsigned | Chapter : 22 | Date : 13/08/07
I LOOKING FOR THE LAST CHAPTER 23-26
ON YOU DON\'T KNOW ME. LOVE THIS STORY
THANKS |
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PANTUISigned | Chapter : 22 | Date : 14/09/06
I love this story is funny, sad, and i dont know its just perfect. Love it.Keep it update, please |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 16 | Date : 18/08/06
aaawwww sooooo sweeeet i want to be hermione and have my own harrrrrreeeee |
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bgegeSigned | Chapter : 22 | Date : 15/06/06
I love this fic, its the nicest piece of fluff i have seen in a while! i will definitely check out your other works now |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 22 | Date : 17/03/06
THAT WAS SO CUTE!
i loved it. and i really really want a sequel..=] |
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BorSLGSigned | Chapter : 22 | Date : 06/02/06
I really liked this story. I thought you did a good job developing the characters, and was happy with the ending. Great job!
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luv4booksUnsigned | Chapter : 22 | Date : 27/12/05
*squeals* that was sooooo romantic and kinda funny when hermione was flirting with Harry. I so wish this fic could be a movie, but not Harry potter style(i wish it could be though)it could be a romantic comedy and it was muggle style.
do you get me? |
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That was so, so, so very cute. I'm very much in love with this story, even if I didn't quite make the connection between the story and the title.
Your writing is very smooth, though there were a few bumps in Hermione's inner monologue where you were definitely telling the story instead of letting her do it. At those moments, the pacing was a little too quick. Otherwise, though, very good flow. I like the typical DramaticFlair!Harry; he's always fun to read about, and he's perfect in stories like this one. Ron is, of course, amusing, and he's not too non-cannon so didn't feel disjointed at all.
Overall, great job! Fantastic! |
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h/hr4everSigned | Chapter : 22 | Date : 21/10/05
hey, is this a wrong impression or wasn't there another chapter in this fic when they all go to the burrow?! |
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Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can. |
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 such a cute story! Preety well written too! The ending was a little sudden and could probably been stretched a little more, but I still liked it. I'm defenetly going to read more of your fanfics  |
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