Oh, poor Ron. But he's such a very good friend to them, isn't he?
I liked the shifting of perspectives. Great job on this fic. |
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*On a Facade reviewing kick*
I liked this story; I don't like reflections, but I really truly liked this story, mainly because I'm currently in a--I don't believe it either--Ron sympathizing phase. And the fact that whenever a three-way friendship deteriorates into a couple and their buddy, someone's going to get hurt, no matter what.
Thanks for a great read! |
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NousiaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/03/04
Poetry. Sheer poetry. And you handled the emotions extremely well - what can I say other than that? This was uplifting, in an odd way. And the takes on the trio is just fantastic. I can see that happening.  Bravo!
(is sorry for this really cheesy review) |
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Tic-TacSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/03/04
Ravishing job. And yes, I do feel sorry for Ron. Poor guy. It's terrible to be left out.
I just have to review your wonderful work, because you give me so much happiness reviewing my stories. I want to thank you for that. This one-shot especially caught my attention. It explained in so few words the trio's ever-dwindling friendship. It's depressing, but uplifting, in a strange, outlandish way. Hmmm.
Well, whatever. Beautiful work, as always, Sandra! ^_^
-Lauren |
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ArianaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/03/04
Awww, now I feel sorry for him too! That was great |
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ouch, that was sad, but true, i know the feeling
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i feel sorry for ron too nice story |
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MuddguttsSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/03/04
That was very interesting. You're so in-touch with your emotions, and how other people feel. Your a very mature writer for your age and I hope you never story writing. I enjoy it too much.
Cheers
Victor |
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crookshankUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/03/04
Fascinatingly UNIQUE is what I can say about the style used here. Short and clear but meaningful. In a short page, the relationship among the trio was clearly outlined without fluffy emotion getting in the way.
Really good fic. |
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Anne USigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/03/04
Where did the rating numbers go to?? I really liked this. I love the first person multiple points of view, it's very nicely done, you show very well how each of them feels. Excellent work. |
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Interesting little bit, thank you. |
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ElizabethUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/03/04
Excellent. Lovely. Great job. |
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lovely as always, sandra.
sorry for the short review ... but have to go. will add something later.
i hope.
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I agree, I feel a little sorry for him. But I hope he would eventually get over himself and realize that even as they get closer together, that as they become *them*, that he was still *their* best friend, too.
Good job. Nice and Angsty and unsure and yet somewhat comforting knowing they are unsettled and unsure of where they are going yet knowing they are going there. |
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Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/03/04
God, this was absolutely wonderful. So deep, so in character, so...perfect. You did it again Sandra. |
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