Did he kill neville and colin? I'm confused. It didn't explain anything about that before now.

Love it so far. I'm beginning to remember how it went when I first read it.

I love this story so far. I read it a while ago, but decided to read it again to refresh my memory.

As a first chapter I think it was good for getting everyone's attention but maybe you could have added more detail/taken your time a bit more, and maybe double checkered it for typos etc. Well done so far!

Come-on you can't leave us hanging like this! It been A very long tine since your last update, hope every thing is ok? PS. Great writing!!!

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I really like your story, but I was wondering if something is wring since you haven't updated in such a long time. Is your muse gone? I really hope that isn't the case because this is such a fine story

Update soon, please?!!!

oooo nice story

i hate cliffhangers WHAT HAPPENED!!!!!

good story needed more though

ooh, were did she come from. can't wait until the next chap comes. so mysterious. i never saw the whole voldie as daddy thing. that one threw me for a loop. :-)

what are u doing , don't you know people like my self don't like cliff hangers.They leave to much to the imagination , well hurry up and update i guess.

Very good chapter! Keep up the great work and write more!

Good story. Update soon.