rochelleUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/12/05
i felt this one (if that makes any senses?) really good kinda hit hom |
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I hate to break it to you, but Ginny won't just get better like that. Through-out this whole fan fci all I could think of is my twin who cuts herself and how hard ti is to save someone who cuts. i've been trying for years. See, she can't just stop. First she has to realize she ahs a problem and ask for help herself. Then she can start to get better and be saved. But besides that. it is a really well wirtten fan fic. you sound like someone who has cut their self, since you are good at describing it. Anyway, my best luck to you in future writing. |
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the 'maybe' at the end almost killed it. Almost. But it was probably my favorite of your stories yet. |
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I loved this! Well written and very realistic. Fantastic job. I was on the verge of tears. |
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Good story, but I do think that the being busy all the time is a bit off the top. Just my opinion...
Also in the -cut open her stomach - a bit of an overreaction there, because she wouldn't be alive then.
Good job though! |
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omg that was so sad  i hope there is a sequal and draco can save ginny before she destroys herself |
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good story... i hope that it gets better as it goes on. i only hope that draco will find away to make sure taht his life doesn't get interupted by work anymore for the fear of losing the one that he loves so much. |
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This, I can say is my first suicide fic I've ever read and I think this will be imprinted in my memory forever. It was wonderful. The emotions of the characters to the cutting. Bleeding, blue veins, scars, it was beautiful. Bloody brilliant. Wonderfully portrayed suicidal attempt. Great different character scenario. Romance and Angst can be seen everwhere in this fic where it isn't truelly depression and despair. Confusing, isn't it? Thank you for writing, if my comments aren't to your liking then you don't have to listen. |
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DanielleUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/03/04
Uh what the hell does MAYBE mean?? Huh? You'd better explain ASAP....now it's going to drive me bonkers till you do. Great.
Please tell me??
Please?
Pretty please?
With a little Draco on top? *image pops into head* Oh my. Ummm, what was I saying?? Oh yeah, what does Maybe mean? Sequel??? And ooo, Draco on top...mmmmmmmm.... Hehe. |
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Great story. i think u should continue because u ave me wondering about the maybe part.. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/03/04
I liked your story; it was very well written. If I could offer a teensy-tiny piece of constructive criticism: your story doesn't finish, it just ends. But aside from that, very well done. |
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omg i love that song, i like atreyu a lot
this is a very good story, tragic and sweet :-p
very real life, i have a friend who used to do that, and your story was a lot like hers, but hers took place over a large span of time.... |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/03/04
it's good
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Awwwww...Is there going to be a sequel? |
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That was THE SWEETEST THING! Well, the ending of course, the actual body of the story was devastating! It worked great though...there was only one problem, you said Madame Pince healed them...that was Madame Pomfrey, Madame Pince was the librarian! Sorry, thought you should know! GREAT PLOT! |
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