MORE!!! MORE!!! are you going to do a story which tells us what litle james gets up to?? please do!! One slight problem was that the chpaters need to be longer!

Ooh, once again, very good story. I think i started reading this, and then stopped or something, because this chapter seems familiar, but regardless ive having red it or not, i really really like it. I can't wait to see how it unfolds.

This story has been a really good read! I think that you should include a sequel, but it is already after the summer that you had writen this. I can therefore assume that no sequal has been written. I hope to read some of your other stories, the ones that I have read have been very good. Keep up the excelent writing!

I love this story.Good Job on crating this,you must have put in lots of effort to make this wonderfully well.

this is a great story i like it a ton wow

I liked the story. Quite interesting. I just found it and decided to read it.

'we cannot do nothing' this is a double negative. you pretty much said that they will do all they can.

evocate is not a real word the closest you could get is evocation which is a recreation of something not present, especially an event or feeling from the past. unless its wod you created for this and if that was the case you should have worded it differently.

You might have even tried invoke rather than evoke. there is a big difference.

truthfully i would think everyone in this was somewhere around 12 , if i didn't know better. you got a good stroy but your wording could be better in some places.

Great Story, I read it in one sitting. You tied the story up brillantly. I really enjoyed how you continued on and explained how life progressed for them. I look foreward to reading your other stories.

I have alredy read this fic an i just rembered that i frogot to review so here it is this story is great

Awsome so Far and Cant wait to see what happens next

Interesting... Sorry I didn't review the last chapter... The cliffhanger was too horrible and I just had to keep reading. The mood you're setting is very nice... The plot is progressing well. I hope it continues as well.

Good Grammar, and spelling and an interesting plot so far. I look forward to continueing reading.

I liked the ideas for your story, but it was too rushed. It just jumped from one thing to the next in each chapter without any real development. The whole story, while good, felt empty because of that reason: there was no real depth in the characters or plot. The whole thing from the battle to the baby at the end was too...convinient and easy to be believed. Also, I was getting frustrated with all of the grammar and spelling mistakes throughout the chapters. It would be best to find another beta reader because he or she did not do a very good job. I'm not intending to be harsh; however, this story could have been written better or at least developed more.