I have read and re-read this story, and finally realise I have not left a review. And loving the story as I do, so here goes my review:

In view of the fact that this story was written waaaay before Book 6, this is like a foreshadowing story. For example, take the quote below:

"I love him…. loving him is something I have never doubted. But I can't allow my love for him to be used as his cage, his comfort."

In Book 6, JKR's description of Harry was that Ginny was his source of comfort.

And this story could very well be Ginny'POV. At the end of Book 6, Harry left her. Either for noble superhero reason or for other reasons, I don't really care. I am just happy JKR decided to end their disgustingly contrived relationship. Just as Harry said in Book 6, everything with Ginny was like a story of someone else's life.

This is a very good story, and written in a very imaginative way. I hope more people will read this.

awww thats really sad and i know how that feels but aww how sweeet and sad

Ooooo - good job!!!

I feel bad for this unnamed Ravenclaw girl - but I think it's a great outsider's POV. Especially since we all know who REALLY belongs together here!

Depressing and yet hopeful. I really liked this, you read stories where the girlfriends bitch about their relationship but never get their side, feel theri pain. This was really nice - althought now it'll be harder to hate the girlfriends/boyfriends. Dammit. Thanks for writing it.

aww....very very sweet! i loved this idea.very very good. u could have even made it into a whole story. it would have been even better! lol

Wow great writing. Very ominises. I like it. I noticed you're spell fate with a capital F is that a clue of something to come or just a mistake. Anyway I think it's rather good and I can't wait to here more.

Gems

Beautifully writen!!!

How I wish this would have a sequel where we can watch fate doing its thing, and he and her getting together.
Please do it?

Wow!! I can see this really happening in the books. Harry gets a girlfriend, but no one, not even Ginny will be able to comfort him, love him, be as loyal to him as Hermione! **sigh** I just love this ship!

Really good. ^_^ Interesting perspective... The best of your three. ^_^ If these are your first stories, I really expect to see the next ones... If you accept a suggestion, try a long story now. Good luck, and keep it up!

I really enjoyed this...interesting perspective.

WOW! (thinking)am i the first one to review? Cool story. I like the approach. It also shows how tightknit the trio is. Good job. i loved it alot.

so sad...sweet..good story!