wow! that was really deep! I loved it!

*sniff* *sniff* simply beautiful, thanks.

awww that was a wonderful story i am going to add it to my favourite , i really like it

sweet

oh god.....im speechless....that was AMAZING!!!!! amazing doesnt even describe it fully...i really really really really really really REALLY love this story!!!

wow...that is all I can say...WOW. I didn't think that I would like this story, but you proved me wrong. It is brilliant and I love it!!!

Please write more soon,

Jenna KAthleen

Interesting take, nice little story.

Hello! You had great descriptions for the emotions in this, that was great. They all came a little too fast, I might suggest slower transitions? they are very important for the reader to digest all those feelings flowing. You do have very good writing there.

Very sweet. I wept.

Very sweet. I wept.

great, amazing fantastic! i can not wait for u to post more....... o wait u already have! lol

Incredible. Everything in this one shot was incredible. You had them in character and it was really emotional to me since I am hearing a song that really goes along with the mood set here.

Oh.... That was just.... beatifull, amazing. I loved it. Are some of the emotions I felt. You have power in your words.

It's nice, but it's far too fast-paced. You've covered an entire lifetime's worth of angst and denial and fear and emotions and confusions in one pat chapter. It felt too rushed. Your writing is excellent, and I would have liked to have seen this teased out over 3 or 4 chapters, it would have flowed better. Nice work, though!

Awesome...sooo touching...I LOVED IT!