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That's SOOOOOOOOO adorable! It's a really wonderful family you've constructed here. I love this story, and Remembrance. Nicely done! |
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That was so sweet. I love Lauren's nickname; Boo. Reminds me of Signs but of course, this is much sweeter then that movie!
I wonder if Luke will have green eyes or brown.
I also like how you said Lauren inherited Harry's smile.  |
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cornygirlUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/08/05
It was such a sweet story, I loved both, the 2nd and 1st!!! It was so nice how Harry was such a nice father, sweet!!! |
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Sorry, but I've just gone through school. The placenta does not actually connect the baby to the mother it is just where the umbilical cord connects to the mother. The placenta is kind of like a docking base, you see. And also the mother's and the baby's blood do not touch. The oxygen and nutrients move from the mother's blood through the couple cell thick placenta into the baby's blood. Sorry again, but I couldn't help correct. |
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That was an absolutely adorable little story and it was nice to read the familial interactions and thought that they were very in character. |
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AllieSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/08/04
WOW! Just as good as it's prequel! II just wish there was more! Well, keep writing cuz you're an awesome writer! |
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tink18Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/04/04
Awe. Really cute. I also like the name Luke. I enjoyed reading this.Please write more to this or some other stories. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/04/04
  how sweet
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Love it. Excellent one-shot. Portkey needs more of these stories about Hermione and Harry married, i for one love them. very heart-warming, and i love this representation of the couple, very loving and tender...makes me go all warm and fuzzy!! lol, good one-shot. |
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Tic-TacSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/03/04
 Aw, too cute. Harry and Hermione are so perfect together ... and Lauren is my name too! *giggles strangely* Uh, yeah. It's actually funny though, I know I real-life person named Lauren Potter. Hmm... 
Adorable. Good job.
-Lauren |
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NaramiSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/03/04
“Aren’t you clever, Daddy!” --Not as clever as you little Boo!! that was hilarious and the questions afterwards even more.
“I have many more questions but my brain has forgotten them,” -- And yes, she is clearly Hermione's child . Pretty fic. Thanks!  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/03/04
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DanaKMSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/03/04
Lovely!!!
Would it be too much to as for another sequel? 
Please?
Pretty please? 
LOL
Great job!! Congratulations!!! |
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augusamUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/03/04
This is great!
“Aren’t you clever, Daddy!”--lol, sounds just like a little Hermione. |
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sweet |
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