that was a lovely story!!!! i really liked it!!!!
keep up righting stories cuz this was an awsome one!!!!

You got me crying there. The words to describe their sadness and other emotions were just so powerful! No idea how much they affected me...

how bittersweet

That was deep... man, you got some talent! I mean, wow! That was all dark and angsty but in the end it was perfect! I've never really read anything like this before!

awww, so sad - but so cute!

omg....that was amazing...i almost suffocated i was crying so hard i could barely breathe!!! this was wonderful!!!! i loved it

that was sad but cute! i loved it!

Wow, that was exciting, intense, and powerful. I felt like I was watching the end of a movie. Great job!

I love these stories
write some more
~ Creepy Susie

Whew! He caught her just in time. Another second and it'd have been too late.

Who was that elderly woman?

*slowly claps, until the claps turn into fast movements* that story was so beautiful and touching, and it really touches me. And a story that personally touches the reader, is an excellent one. I could feel Hermione and Harry's pain, and it made it real. Thank you for sharing your wonderful writing with us.

That was really good deatil! I could read this story over and over and over again. I has a very relistic hint to it!

:: swallows :: Awwwwwwww The beginning was so sad and angsty. It reminded me of a ficlet I'm writing and ohh, thats so sad. The only thing is that you used she/her, he/him so often it became hard to read but I suppose the story was suppose to be like that.

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She was gone. She had taken her clothes, everything.
Along with his heart.
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That was beautiful written. I'm glad they got together!

That was sooooo good! You've got some talent! one question, who was the old lady? keep writing!!!