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Nadja
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/03/04
Um... it was interesting. Can't say it was all that realistic, but cute none the less. Just a tiny thing to point out. In every instance you used the word "coarse," it should have been "course." Not to pick - this is constuctive. "Coarse" means rough, kinda like sand paper. Good job though!
 

violatedpenguin
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/03/04
ooooooh i like this!!! its really good....i love weddings!!! drinks all around!...potc fan...but post soon!! i cant wait!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/03/04
Not a bad start. Just a few spelling problems (it's course, not coarse), but other than that, a good job. Looking forward to chapter 2.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/03/04
First off, good story! Just a few hints -- it is course not coarse and right not rite. Keep up the good work!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/03/04
whatever dude.........i didnt read it but as i skimmed it seemed really good!!!
 

danielerin
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/03/04
Too funny. Looking forward to more hijinks. Good job.
 

KypDurron
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/03/04
LMAO!!! Ron and food, an unbeatable combination. Remind me to never stand between him and the buffet table.

LMAO again! 'Harmony' Granger. Gotta love Gred and Forge.
 

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