Oh yes, this is one of the few way that it could be, that it could really start... even in spite of what jkr says :-)
As i liked very much a story that told that Hermione has cold feet i have some problems seeing her doing that
Bye

Excellent quote of Tolkien and it fit so well. I love it. It's so friendly, and yet a kiss at the end fits so wonderfully. Gorgeous.

WOW.

This was absolutely beautiful.

It's sometimes hard to say that about writing, but it really was. You could SEE the scene, Hermione with her foot in the water and Harry, thinking about the world, watching her underneath his cloak. And your dialouge! *is so very jealous* You make it seem so careless, so easy, and not for one second out of character.

Very, very impressed. I'm so glad I stumbled on this!

love, Rooney

LOVED IT!!!!! Excellent usage of grammar and speech. I hate it when people write horribly when the story is so good. Your plot is very unique and alluring.

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outstanding. you've got a knack for this, i'm sure no one's going to disagree with me. i liked the way you showed their emotions through actions and expressions rather than plainly saying how they felt.

and the interweaving of the tolkien quote was very fitting. (hey, you're on a roll.. this is the third fic of yours i've read today.)

Gorgeous. Absolutely gorgeous.

This was brilliant! I loved it very much--there's nothing for me to critique. I love your writing style, and the imagery you put forth. I'm going to go see if you have any other fics to read now...I give you a 10, but there's no bar for me to grade you on...

Sweet.

wow...and you are how old? 14? I am 17 and i don't know what some of the words you used mean....(ok I am joking on that) this is a great one-shot...I love the way you wrote it!

that was fabulous! your writing is beautiful and eloquent! and yeah for tolkien!

That was wonderful. The wording could pretty much be poetic

That was quite beautiful...

That was really good. I love all of your one-shot fics.