Oh wow. My heart just ached reading this. Really good.

uuuuuuuuu

So sad, but very well written. I can certainly feel his pain.

Whyever did you delete this??? It's brilliant! And you know that, coming from a die-hard D/G shippger, this is a huuuuuge compliment. There seems to be something wrong with chapter two though...
Ri

wow..that was absolutely beautiful...completely heartwrenching but beautiful all the same
can't wait for more!

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. Wonderful talent you have. I wait anxiously for the next chapter. Great job.

'my precious'

kw702955, I stupidly posted the same chapter as chapter one AND two. Chapter two is not typed out yet, so there shouldn't be a chapter two at all, right now. I hope you stick around till then.

did not work for some reason will you repost

That's so sad
Please update the second part soon
~ Creepy Susie

Oh whoops... and here I felt fine, that I did the whole 'post a fiction without a beta" thing right. *rolls eyes at self* Thanks Nitya.

And everyone for their comments, I really appreciate it.

Stupid Beta Side..anyway, spotted a little typo at the beginning. "Memorized" should be "mesmerized," right? Ah, well. Besides that, it didn't mar the fic.

Bascially repeating what I said before.

Oh, beautiful work. I just love your writing. Lovely. I'm very glad you decided to make this a two-part capture ...

*melts into pile of goo* Honestly, I need some sleep ... stomach flu's coming around ... *groans*


-Lauren

Hey! This is great! And yours truly is a greedy little sod too, so stop complaining. We have a good reason for wanting you to put "Goodbye" back. (And thank you that you did.)

On second thought, great really doesn't cover it. Loffly and marvelous and heartwrenching come to mind. Bravo, Sandra.

Ah stupid me, I just realized it's a two part ficlet Well, that makes it even better... Maybe I'll have my happy ending?? Please??

Yeah we won!!! Never understimate the power of us Piscis to push people.

I don't understand why you had deleted this, Sandra. It's really good... So angsty and heartbreaking... I'm almost tempted to beg you o write more and don't live it at that, but strangely, I thought the ending was good and I don't like sad endings!

I'm glad I read this. You never disappoint.