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interesting.
very interesting.
i agree....alittle confusing but i think i may understand it. just have to puzzle a few things together.
well, i'm thinking harry finally came back? or else, harry comes back after stalking off asking her to play the music.
ahhh, whatever. i liked it. very interesting.
melissa
acoustics1220
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JaeUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 31/03/05
Wait, I'm really confused. (Sorry, I'm not always very quick.) I don't get the ending. She said no to playing the song, what? If you could explain, or if someone who gets it can explain, I would greatly appreciate it. It was very well written, by the way. Sad and very emotional. I just don't understand the ending. |
Author Feedback: Hahaha, its oky, I usually make my endings like this, that are left up to interpretation.
Basically what was going through my head as I wrote that was what the title connotated to her. It was a reminder that he left that he could leave again, of horrible memories. So she simply took a stand on that.
Sorry for my horrible explanation.  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 11/06/04
wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wowo! |
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NilremUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/06/04
very well done, so so so sad, but they will be together in the end, either way!
very nice
- Nilrem |
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SzaraneaUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 25/04/04
I cannot log in at the moment, because everything's gone a bit wonky at the moment, apparently, but I'm still me
I only got around to reading part two now, and I love it! It's so sad and sappy at the same time (sappy is good here). Flugsty. I almost cried when reading it, but I have a slight fever, and I start crying easily then.
Ri |
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AnazecriaSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 21/04/04
Ah, I'm loving this newfound Flugst. Goes down well.  Though I didn't think you'd be one to let Hermione boss you around Sandra, but it's a good thing she did! I loved this, a wonderful mix, and even reason for me to be glad you changed your mind and reposted the original story. I loved how you worked in the "My Knee" part, maybe we'll have a decrease in the "Mione" fics. Whee! Thankyou Sandra!
Nielle |
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Tic-TacSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 21/04/04
You know I love it, Sandra. Hauntingly sad and beautiful. Though, for some reason, the Beatles kept singing in my head ... "Hello hello ... I don't know why you say goodbye, I say hello ..." ... Anyway, wonderful, wonderful piece. More people should incorporate non-rock music (not that there's anything wrong with it!) into Harry/Hermione stories. It adds to the "texture" their relationship, if you will. *looks confused* *shakes head* Glad Hermione made you write that happy ending.
-Lauren |
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augusamUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 21/04/04
This is very pwoerful. I really enjoyed it. I'm glad Hermione forced you into a hopeful ending. |
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Great writing Sandra! I loved how you merged reality and flashbacks. Absolutely heartwrenching. I'm tempted to actually compose 'Goodbye' but I'll probably just ruin your idea of what it sounds like in your head. Hmm, maybe I'll try it |
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Yes! You picked a happy ending! I'm glad... too many angst fics for one day... Phew! |
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KazeSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/04/04
Oh, that was absolutely lovely. My favorite part was: "Slivers of dusty light danced around her vulnerable face. He will remember this.
Across her natural blushful cheeks, he loved to caress. And will remember caressing.
He observed her long eyelashes that glittered with tears one too many times for his liking. He did not want her to cry any longer, or more than what was required of her."
I thought that was hauntingly beautiful.
 Wonderful as always. |
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NityaUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 21/04/04
Awww . . the ending was far better than I'd ever thought it'd be.
It's lovely, the emotions clear and vivid and god knows everything else
Beta Side: And you have a few typos.
Me: *thwap*
Anyway, splendid job, Sandra. |
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WonkyKrisSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 21/04/04
Sooooo, after how long he just comes back like that? What was it? Two years? And he just walks in? I love it! Great job Sandra. |
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AnazecriaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/03/04
Greedy little sod am I?  Well then so be it! I loved this when it was originally posted, I love it now. Don't you dare delete it again! Thankyou Dear Sister for returning this story to its rightful place. Romy is right, never underestimate the power of Pisces! Damn, you write such wonderful angst! And what do you mean doesn't make sense?
Nielle |
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